Got Little Snippets. Need Advice.
 

It's just songs
from a movie
replayin' in my
head.

Instead of playin',
then stoppin',
it's going over & over
again.
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(that was one snippet.)
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It's cotton candy rock & rock
It's cotton candy mind control
It's cotton candy in our soul
And we don't care!
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(And that was the other)
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I'm trying to really decide if I want to combine the two into one song, or if I want to work them as separate. I've had a bit of experience with poetry, but not real much with lyrics. :usehead: Mind giving me advice?

Am I not going to go anything? No comments, no advice?

Snippets are no good for critiquing. Write a song and I'd be happy to give advice

Thanks.

Snippets are where a song begins
 

Hello, I think that your snippets are somehow connected and I would say to combine them into one song if you can. They are a great start to a song. And just remember, keep writing those snippets, they are where every song begins, with a phrase or a catchy lyric! I hope this helps, please let me know when you have more written, I would really like to see the finished song. Thanks-

Jason

I agree with Jay2005. The snippets are somewhat connected. However, cotton candy isnt something i'd be talking abvout but hey, its your song. Tell me how it turns out.

keep writing down stuff that pops into ur head, it might just be that u put a song together and u don't know it