Temptress (lyrics, Kiss, show)

Trauma · 06-11-2005, 10:33 PM

Temptress
Red lips
Two reasons to die
Top and bottom
Angel and demon

They hook my sweet bouquet while it lulls them
Tongue to tongue
More like claw to flower
Like the eagle, you snatch my affection

Protect, sweet darling bee
You stung me in the eyes
Prowl, ferocious old lion
You clawed my smile with your talons

Nameless beast, show yourself
Stop the parody
You are no human
Cloaked wolf, you seek to wound me

I want to give you the chance, again
I suppose my ignorance prevails
It gives rise to this sweet bliss
I could frolic through meadows of denial

Kiss you like I did one thousand times before
Maim me like you did one million times before
Hurt can be divided into eras
Pain can only be synonymous with existence

Your gates taste of bitterness
They close and open as they wish
God must control those two beasts
Angel and demon; my weaknesses

Why does red prevail when the angel must be white?
You put no lipstick on this morning, dear
Why is disdain not pale color?
Your lips are advertising my blood

-Jake 6/11/05

.angie. · 06-11-2005, 11:02 PM

i think it's quite good. i think it's really like, different than other lyrics posted here. i like it.

riseagainstrocks · 06-12-2005, 12:58 PM

I'm guessing this has refences to the whore of Babylon?

yeah.

i like it. the meter needs cleaning up but other than that very nice.

Trauma · 06-12-2005, 01:52 PM

^
No lol, no references of any sort.
It was free verse, I didn't think of rhyme scheme or anything.
I wrote it in about 10 minutes, the only thing I thought about was four lines per stanza.

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe · 06-13-2005, 02:27 AM

really good. i like it a lot. amazing for only taking you ten minutes.

06-11-2005, 10:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Temptress Temptress Red lips Two reasons to die Top and bottom Angel and demon They hook my sweet bouquet while it lulls them Tongue to tongue More like claw to flower Like the eagle, you snatch my affection Protect, sweet darling bee You stung me in the eyes Prowl, ferocious old lion You clawed my smile with your talons Nameless beast, show yourself Stop the parody You are no human Cloaked wolf, you seek to wound me I want to give you the chance, again I suppose my ignorance prevails It gives rise to this sweet bliss I could frolic through meadows of denial Kiss you like I did one thousand times before Maim me like you did one million times before Hurt can be divided into eras Pain can only be synonymous with existence Your gates taste of bitterness They close and open as they wish God must control those two beasts Angel and demon; my weaknesses Why does red prevail when the angel must be white? You put no lipstick on this morning, dear Why is disdain not pale color? Your lips are advertising my blood -Jake 6/11/05 __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

06-11-2005, 11:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	i think it's quite good. i think it's really like, different than other lyrics posted here. i like it. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

06-12-2005, 12:58 PM	#3 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	I'm guessing this has refences to the whore of Babylon? yeah. i like it. the meter needs cleaning up but other than that very nice. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

06-12-2005, 01:52 PM	#4 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	^ No lol, no references of any sort. It was free verse, I didn't think of rhyme scheme or anything. I wrote it in about 10 minutes, the only thing I thought about was four lines per stanza. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño