I'm Mat and these are my words.

Matreyu918 · 08-06-2013, 11:22 AM

I'm fairly new to writing lyrics, songs, and rhymes so I figure I'd get opinions and critique now rather than later once the bad habits are ingrained.

So if you're reading this, Thanks.

-Mat

Matreyu918 · 08-06-2013, 11:23 AM

Chiasmus

Running out of time, inner eye on that
Tick tick tick tockin paradigm
Insecure with the state of my mind
Predefined as misaligned, under refined
Exasperated and agitated with this so called
Status Quo

So I present the manifesto
Of a mad sh*t virtuoso
The superego of an unhinged anti-hero
Binged out on my own counter flow

Appetite like an astrocyte
Soul spent by this Sanctimonious chiasmus
Self-appointed catalyst of a much needed Iconoclasm
Atheistic neoplasm, non-denominational abolitionist
This is the gospel of a theological abortionist

08-06-2013, 11:22 AM	#1 (permalink)
Matreyu918 Groupie Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Muskogee, Ok Posts: 2	I'm Mat and these are my words. I'm fairly new to writing lyrics, songs, and rhymes so I figure I'd get opinions and critique now rather than later once the bad habits are ingrained. So if you're reading this, Thanks. -Mat

08-06-2013, 11:23 AM	#2 (permalink)
Matreyu918 Groupie Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Muskogee, Ok Posts: 2	Chiasmus Running out of time, inner eye on that Tick tick tick tockin paradigm Insecure with the state of my mind Predefined as misaligned, under refined Exasperated and agitated with this so called Status Quo So I present the manifesto Of a mad sht virtuoso The superego of an unhinged anti-hero Binged out on my own counter flow Appetite like an astrocyte Soul spent by this Sanctimonious chiasmus Self-appointed catalyst of a much needed Iconoclasm Atheistic neoplasm, non-denominational abolitionist This is the gospel of a theological abortionist Last edited by Matreyu918; 08-06-2013 at 11:50 AM.*