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Matreyu918 08-06-2013 10:22 AM

I'm Mat and these are my words.
 
I'm fairly new to writing lyrics, songs, and rhymes so I figure I'd get opinions and critique now rather than later once the bad habits are ingrained.

So if you're reading this, Thanks.

-Mat

Matreyu918 08-06-2013 10:23 AM

Chiasmus

Running out of time, inner eye on that
Tick tick tick tockin paradigm
Insecure with the state of my mind
Predefined as misaligned, under refined
Exasperated and agitated with this so called
Status Quo

So I present the manifesto
Of a mad sh*t virtuoso
The superego of an unhinged anti-hero
Binged out on my own counter flow

Appetite like an astrocyte
Soul spent by this Sanctimonious chiasmus
Self-appointed catalyst of a much needed Iconoclasm
Atheistic neoplasm, non-denominational abolitionist
This is the gospel of a theological abortionist


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