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Old 07-13-2013, 07:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Angel - please give me some feedback :)

This song is writen about my ex-girlfriend when i used to date her, i wrote this for her birthday as a present.
Lyrics are writen for rock-hard rock genre, sort of
i appreciate all feedback

One day her smile come to my life,
And her eyes told me,
How to be myself all the time,
And dont live in my own space.
I hope she love me,
and become part of my life,
i feel i can do anything by her side.
Fly through skyes,
and dive oceans of misery.

She is awesome in the inside,
pretty on the outside,
im going ****ing insane,
when i think about her,
Like an angel she rock a way,
to deep of my hearth every time,
Falling from skyes to my hands,
So i can take care of her
,making my eyes believe,
she is one i truly love.

My blood is boiling when i see her,
She is too hot so i cant hide it,
Calling her devil is against my word ,
I want to stay beside her,
Hope she makes me think about sin.
I will fight for her,
I sell my life to a devil for her,
To save her angel wings,
And send her back to heaven where she belongs.

She is awesome in the inside,
pretty on the outside,
im going ****ing insane,
when i think about her,
Like an angel she make a way,
to deep of my hearth every time,
Falling from skyes to my hands,
So i can take care of her,
making my eyes believe,
she is one i truly love.
She is awesome in the inside,
Pretty on the outside,
I want be with her,
And make her feel special every time,
She deserves to be called angel of my life.
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