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Old 04-28-2013, 04:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Wrote some lyrics, are they any good? Honest opinions please!

I wrote this a while back and kinda forgot about it till I ran across it again a few days ago, I just want some opinions on if its good or not. I have a link to me singing it on YouTube, there's no music, but at least you can hear how it goes! Message me if you want the link...

Here's the lyrics!



Temporary



(Verse 1)
Tempers flare high
While emotions run deep
You said this was love
But we both know talk is cheap
You said it
But I know it was a lie

You said you would try harder
You promised no more fights
But your words mean nothing
Cause your actions spoke tonight
Oh your words mean nothing
And I can't take this one more night


(Chorus)
Why make the effort
If it just falls in the end
Why carry on
We're just a fading trend
You push me away
As you hold on to my hand.
We both knew
That this wasn't permanent
But was temporary
Really our intent


(Verse 2)
In the heat of the moment
Things are better left unsaid
But is saying nothing
The best thing to do instead
This is driving me crazy
I think I'm going insane

Yelling regrets
While hiding how you feel
I doubt that this is healthy
But it's just how we deal
And now we're slowly going crazy
Cause we don't know how to explain


(Chorus)
Why make the effort
If it just falls in the end
Why carry on
We're just a fading trend
You push me away
As you hold on to my hand
We both knew
That this wasn't permanent
But was temporary
Really our intent


(Bridge)
Words are thrown like stones
And soon we're buried under them
I've done nothing wrong
Yet all you do is condemn


(Chorus)
Why make the effort
If it just falls in the end
Why carry on
We're just a fading trend
You push me away
As you hold on to my hand
We both knew
That this wasn't permanent
But was temporary
Really our intent
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