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Old 04-03-2013, 11:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A man dies alone,
in despair.
Last thought,
do you want to share?

And the crowd is thrilled.
They are not here for you,
they want you to be killed.

It must end.
A tragedy, we ignore it because of our own dread.
Last question,
have you gone mad?
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Old 04-04-2013, 02:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I love the first two verses. It's kept brief and a twist is added.
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Old 04-11-2013, 04:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you very much!
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