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Old 03-31-2013, 03:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Post Ghost whos feeling discouraged.

Not getting much feedback so im starting to get discouraged.
What do YOU think?
(2nd verse is the best)

Vices & Virtues
Vices & Virtues i hope i never hurt you
Parents and curfews made it hard to come and see you
boobies and booties oh how easy they distract me
but in my mind i know i never could forget you
cause im always thinking of you gonna hold you when i see you
gonna kiss you cause i love to gonna text you cause i need to
talk to you on a daily basis swear to God i do miss everything about you
your bodys perfect like a woman in a cartoon
i need to see you need to see you see you real soon
night time full moon summertime june
hope you remember thats the first time that i kissed you
it took me so long to find you
and then i ****ed it all up

[hook]
I was yelling i was screaming wouldnt shut the **** up
yelling louder screaming louder guess i was loud enough
but i... i swear to god i didnt mean it
and i... i really hope i didnt hurt you
baby...i can explain i hope
i know i ****ed it all up im at the end of my rope

hell is being butt naked in a room full of mosquitos
hell is friday night sausage fest filled with guitos
hell is being without you on a night like this
hell is knowing ill never find a love like this again
give me a break it was just one big mistake baby
being without you is just more than i can take
and i just wanna talk just a little conversation
i promised you that i changed do you need a demonstartion?
look i never thought a guy like me would be in love
and i know i ****ed up but im trying love
im like a blind man cryin cause i never get to see you
like an old man dyin who is riddled with regret
im drinking poison every night because im tryin to forget
i ****in party every night because im looking for some answers
like a message in a bottle or a message in a baggie oh
forgive me even though i know i ****ed it all up

it sounds a lot better when its recorded
check it out Not getting much feedback so im starting to get discouraged.
What do YOU think?

Vices & Virtues i hope i never hurt you
Parents and curfews made it hard to come and see you
boobies and booties oh how easy they distract me
but in my mind i know i never could forget you
cause im always thinking of you gonna hold you when i see you
gonna kiss you cause i love to gonna text you cause i need to
talk to you on a daily basis swear to God i do miss everything about you
your bodys perfect like a woman in a cartoon
i need to see you need to see you see you real soon
night time full moon summertime june
hope you remember thats the first time that i kissed you
it took me so long to find you
and then i ****ed it all up

[hook]
I was yelling i was screaming wouldnt shut the **** up
yelling louder screaming louder guess i was loud enough
but i... i swear to god i didnt mean it
and i... i really hope i didnt hurt you
baby...i can explain i hope
i know i ****ed it all up im at the end of my rope

hell is being butt naked in a room full of mosquitos
hell is friday night sausage fest filled with guitos
hell is being without you on a night like this
hell is knowing ill never find a love like this again
give me a break it was just one big mistake baby
being without you is just more than i can take
and i just wanna talk just a little conversation
i promised you that i changed do you need a demonstartion?
look i never thought a guy like me would be in love
and i know i ****ed up but im trying love
im like a blind man cryin cause i never get to see you
like an old man dyin who is riddled with regret
im drinking poison every night because im tryin to forget
i ****in party every night because im looking for some answers
like a message in a bottle or a message in a baggie oh
forgive me even though i know i ****ed it all up

it sounds a lot better when its recorded
Not getting much feedback so im starting to get discouraged.
What do YOU think?

Vices & Virtues i hope i never hurt you
Parents and curfews made it hard to come and see you
boobies and booties oh how easy they distract me
but in my mind i know i never could forget you
cause im always thinking of you gonna hold you when i see you
gonna kiss you cause i love to gonna text you cause i need to
talk to you on a daily basis swear to God i do miss everything about you
your bodys perfect like a woman in a cartoon
i need to see you need to see you see you real soon
night time full moon summertime june
hope you remember thats the first time that i kissed you
it took me so long to find you
and then i ****ed it all up

[hook]
I was yelling i was screaming wouldnt shut the **** up
yelling louder screaming louder guess i was loud enough
but i... i swear to god i didnt mean it
and i... i really hope i didnt hurt you
baby...i can explain i hope
i know i ****ed it all up im at the end of my rope

hell is being butt naked in a room full of mosquitos
hell is friday night sausage fest filled with guitos
hell is being without you on a night like this
hell is knowing ill never find a love like this again
give me a break it was just one big mistake baby
being without you is just more than i can take
and i just wanna talk just a little conversation
i promised you that i changed do you need a demonstartion?
look i never thought a guy like me would be in love
and i know i ****ed up but im trying love
im like a blind man cryin cause i never get to see you
like an old man dyin who is riddled with regret
im drinking poison every night because im tryin to forget
i ****in party every night because im looking for some answers
like a message in a bottle or a message in a baggie oh
forgive me even though i know i ****ed it all up

it sounds a lot better when its recorded
i didnt finish the lyrics just in case no one reads this lol
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Old 03-31-2013, 03:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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"boobies and booties"...

I stopped reading after that part.
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