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03-25-2013, 03:57 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Mar 2013
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criticism for lyrics
looking for someone to help me change somthing that he think can be changed for the lyrics
the day you were gone 9/11 Every day we awoke beside each other But now it's not you it's just another man that i see beside me in my bed I just can't get the fact that you're now dead It's crawling inside so very slowly I can't take it anymore I'm so lonely Every night in my dreams saying you're right behind Where are you, I can't see you I'm losing my mind Since that day I'm not alive I'm going crazy I cant survive You were my heart and my soul And since you're gone this world's a black hole Why did it happen on that special day I remember it like it was yesterday I tried to get over you but I don't Always a voice inside me saying I won't Our life is not going according to plan And now I'm married to another man But you will always own my heart I'll never forget you, without you I'm falling apart Since that day I'm not alive I'm going crazy I can't survive Maybe we just weren't meant to be Maybe this is our destiny It's like it was yesterday I remember But I'll never forget it, the 11th of September |
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