Psychedub Dude

Not sure how I feel about it, it can definitely use some tweaks. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

Open your ears and listen to the music in the wind
Sing along and the journey will begin
To distant lands cause now your minds opening
To another world, you just have to listen

Take my hand and well leave this place
Well leave our problems here and then give chase
To dreams we’ve always had while stuck in this daze
Erase all troubles and be at peace

We’ve searched far and wide struggling to get by
But together we’ll make it we just have to try
To seek out peace from within our mind
I know you can do it your much stronger than I

Take my hand and well leave this place
Well leave our problems here and then give chase
To dreams we’ve always had while stuck in this daze
Erase all troubles and be at peace

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There is only one beer left
Rappers screaming all in our ears like we're deaf
Tempt me, do a number on the label
Eat up all their MC's and drink 'em under the table

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Shadows Of Our Souls