Hidden
 

Verse 1

I broke my wings and forgot my mission,

Need a way to something new, I broke my limbs and blurred my vision,

And I don’t know what to do,

Because my only hope was you,

Think I’ll stay here hidden,

Find a way to ease the pain,

Just stay here hidden,

As I figure out your game,

And let the weed inside my brain,

Until heaven calls my name,

And the skies cry out the rain.

Chorus:

Truth is never clear, and lies are very dear

I don’t wana hear , cuz you don’t really care

Now angels are near, time to go I fear

I’ll lay here dreaming, wishing you were here

I’ll stay forever dreaming, wishing you were here, I wish you were here, I wish you here

Verse 2

Stolen things and no ambition,

Save a day cuz rent is due,

Love chokes with no submission,

Life is dead with none to do,

Thinking all I need is you,

Think I’ll stay here hidden,

From all the ties that give me pain,

Just stay here hidden,

As I figure out this game,

As I make it back to sane,

Until heaven calls my name,

And the skies cry out the rain.

Pretty good, if you could make a structure which is more noticeable this would be a good song.

what u tink now?