WolvenDogma

Well, this is the first song I ever wrote, I was wondering what you guys thought?

"The Wolf Boy" By: Zak, AKA-WolvenDogma

"Roaming lonely in the dark,
it seems that I have lost my bark.
This whole damn search has got me tired but restless.
Just a lone wolf lookin' for his pack,
Don't underestimate me, I'll attack
any poor fool in my way...

They call me, A freak show,
I couldn't care less.
Your the one who's weird in,
My eyes!
Now tell me, I'm psycho
That may be true, but I've got more passion than,
Any of you!
Now call me,
THE WOLF BOY!
I won't take offence,
it is not my choice, it's who,
I AM!

So,
HATE ME!
(hate me!)
For what, I will not change.
You humans have always seemed so strange.
Why can't you just accept me?
Maybe it's because I AM a psycho!
And someone real easy to lie to!
Well at least that's the way it used to be.
Til' a girl came and stole my heart,
then tore it out, tore it apart
And left my body,
FOR THE WOLVES!!!!!

They call me, A freak show,
I couldn't care less.
Your the one who's weird in,
My eyes!
Now tell me, I'm psycho
That may be true, but I've got more passion than,
Any of you!
Now call me,
THE WOLF BOY!
I won't take offence,
it is not my choice, it's who,
I AM!

x4) WHO I AM!
x2) WHO AM I?!?

[Still tweaking the lyrics around a bit, leave any tips if you have any! Thanks for reading!]