little poem type. What do you think?

booch johnson · 02-11-2013, 05:00 PM

I feel like I'm running
Running in the waves
The waves are crashing in
And they keep knocking me down
But I'll be searching
Everywhere under the sun
Just to find out where you are
And I'm ready for it to be far
See I'll never give you up
And I'll never let you down
Why'd you leave me
And why now

Cinnamonics · 02-12-2013, 02:55 PM

I dug it until the last two lines. It went from a hopeful fancy about the future to a quest of desperation to acquire something lost forever, and in this case it was a turn for the worse for me.

02-11-2013, 05:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
booch johnson Groupie Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1	little poem type. What do you think? I feel like I'm running Running in the waves The waves are crashing in And they keep knocking me down But I'll be searching Everywhere under the sun Just to find out where you are And I'm ready for it to be far See I'll never give you up And I'll never let you down Why'd you leave me And why now

02-12-2013, 02:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
Cinnamonics Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2012 Posts: 117	I dug it until the last two lines. It went from a hopeful fancy about the future to a quest of desperation to acquire something lost forever, and in this case it was a turn for the worse for me.