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My ****
Here is some of my stuff:
The female hitler where do i go from here? i sense the end is near i cannot see your face im stuck in outerspace I fell into your trap i felt your evil slap so i knew i had to do something about you Its the end of your reign im going insane i could have ripped out my brain Now i walk from you my hell is done and thru You fed me to the sharks you locked me up all dark You took its all from me i never looked i couldnt see i never realized i was so ill advised I would have never guessed until i saw i was in ur nest |
that sucks. and you're an idiot. leave the forums NOW.
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haha angie
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well. he's an idiot, it's proven by his retarded lyrics. it ALL rhymes, like bad (very bad) rhyming.. honestly, that's stupid. he bothers me already.
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I looked just to double check, but there isn't anything here that you've written Angie. Hmmmmm....
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i write stuff. it's just really personal and i dont feel comfortable posting it.
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but don't call him an idiot. i like the "waking up in your nest" part. oh wait, it's not exactly how i remembered it... but.. try to write longer lines or at least write some more lines between the ones that rhyme
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Yeah, rhyming every two lines makes it quite.... cheesy. Sounds like rap or something (which maybe it is?). Not really something I would want to listen to in a song.
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