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sexpistol8212 05-27-2005 08:27 PM

My ****
 
Here is some of my stuff:


The female hitler

where do i go from here?
i sense the end is near
i cannot see your face
im stuck in outerspace
I fell into your trap
i felt your evil slap
so i knew i had to do
something about you
Its the end of your reign
im going insane
i could have ripped out my brain
Now i walk from you
my hell is done and thru
You fed me to the sharks
you locked me up all dark
You took its all from me
i never looked i couldnt see
i never realized
i was so ill advised
I would have never guessed
until i saw i was in ur nest

.angie. 05-27-2005 08:33 PM

that sucks. and you're an idiot. leave the forums NOW.

jesus 05-27-2005 09:24 PM

haha angie

.angie. 05-27-2005 09:31 PM

well. he's an idiot, it's proven by his retarded lyrics. it ALL rhymes, like bad (very bad) rhyming.. honestly, that's stupid. he bothers me already.

IamAlejo 05-27-2005 10:02 PM

I looked just to double check, but there isn't anything here that you've written Angie. Hmmmmm....

.angie. 05-27-2005 10:31 PM

i write stuff. it's just really personal and i dont feel comfortable posting it.

blackTshirt 05-28-2005 03:29 AM

but don't call him an idiot. i like the "waking up in your nest" part. oh wait, it's not exactly how i remembered it... but.. try to write longer lines or at least write some more lines between the ones that rhyme

phoenixflames 05-29-2005 11:09 AM

Yeah, rhyming every two lines makes it quite.... cheesy. Sounds like rap or something (which maybe it is?). Not really something I would want to listen to in a song.

stonedpath 05-29-2005 06:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sexpistol8212
Here is some of my stuff:


The female hitler

where do i go from here?
i sense the end is near
i cannot see your face
im stuck in outerspace
I fell into your trap
i felt your evil slap
so i knew i had to do
something about you
Its the end of your reign
im going insane
i could have ripped out my brain
Now i walk from you
my hell is done and thru
You fed me to the sharks
you locked me up all dark
You took its all from me
i never looked i couldnt see
i never realized
i was so ill advised
I would have never guessed
until i saw i was in ur nest


Congrats Your the new Dr. Seuss

ladyluckrules 05-30-2005 07:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by phoenixflames
Yeah, rhyming every two lines makes it quite.... cheesy. Sounds like rap or something (which maybe it is?). Not really something I would want to listen to in a song.

female hitler rap, has a ring to it!


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