bitta help here? (lyrics, song, Spoons)

earthisfull · 05-23-2005, 03:35 AM

Hey! I'm writing this song for my school production and I'm stuck on lyrics. It's a comedy, so they don't have to deep or meaningful or anything. Basically, I need at least 3 verses. The song is about this guy Melvit, he's a fashion designer. He makes suits out of spoons and forks. He's one of those narrow minded people that once he had one idea (suits of spoons and forks) he can't let it go. There are other charactors that should be included in the song: Matt (a kid, about 12 or so), Cook (Drunk, in love with a mannaquin), Ditzy (exactly like her name, likes clothes), and 6 assistants (blonde, obbsess with sizes and weights, possibly annorexic). This is pretty much the structure I need(unless you people have ideas):
verse 1: Intro, about his life before, his motovation for a design
v 2: I already have this one, though I may add more. It goes like this:
I thought of spoons and forks
And their simple elegance
Why not make them into shirts
and maybe even pants
v 3: Needs to finish with him unvealing his creation, and putting them on his subjects (Matt, Cook and Ditzy). How perfect it is, how just cloth is inferior and all that
I also thought, since Ditzy likes fashion, she could but in occaissonally with stuff like: What about in blue?
chorus: I'm not really sure, but I thought something like:
thinking of dinner
but not of the food
just forks for the main course
and spoons for dessert

thats pretty much all i have. I don't have any music. If you could suggest any. It can't be slow or anything, it's a happy song, fast too.
Thanx

phoenixflames · 05-29-2005, 12:11 PM

Sounds like you have a good start going to me. Keep trying, you'll be able to do it on your own. You don't need our help

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ladyluckrules · 05-29-2005, 05:09 PM

woh, that's a crazy school production you got there, then again they always are a bit...

05-23-2005, 03:35 AM	#1 (permalink)
earthisfull Groupie Join Date: May 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 3	bitta help here? Hey! I'm writing this song for my school production and I'm stuck on lyrics. It's a comedy, so they don't have to deep or meaningful or anything. Basically, I need at least 3 verses. The song is about this guy Melvit, he's a fashion designer. He makes suits out of spoons and forks. He's one of those narrow minded people that once he had one idea (suits of spoons and forks) he can't let it go. There are other charactors that should be included in the song: Matt (a kid, about 12 or so), Cook (Drunk, in love with a mannaquin), Ditzy (exactly like her name, likes clothes), and 6 assistants (blonde, obbsess with sizes and weights, possibly annorexic). This is pretty much the structure I need(unless you people have ideas): verse 1: Intro, about his life before, his motovation for a design v 2: I already have this one, though I may add more. It goes like this: I thought of spoons and forks And their simple elegance Why not make them into shirts and maybe even pants v 3: Needs to finish with him unvealing his creation, and putting them on his subjects (Matt, Cook and Ditzy). How perfect it is, how just cloth is inferior and all that I also thought, since Ditzy likes fashion, she could but in occaissonally with stuff like: What about in blue? chorus: I'm not really sure, but I thought something like: thinking of dinner but not of the food just forks for the main course and spoons for dessert thats pretty much all i have. I don't have any music. If you could suggest any. It can't be slow or anything, it's a happy song, fast too. Thanx

05-29-2005, 12:11 PM	#2 (permalink)
phoenixflames Something That You're Not Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Cold And All Alone Posts: 475	Sounds like you have a good start going to me. Keep trying, you'll be able to do it on your own. You don't need our help . __________________ ----------- I'm the lead singer and bass player for the band The Ascent (And Decline) Of Terrion. Yay for me... We're from Ohio. Yay for us... www.theascentofterrion.com Be our friend on MySpace

05-29-2005, 05:09 PM	#3 (permalink)
ladyluckrules D: Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: England Posts: 507	woh, that's a crazy school production you got there, then again they always are a bit... __________________ AHOY SAILOR