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11-09-2012, 01:18 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Nov 2012
Posts: 1
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Started posting lyrics
Hi All,
I'm an aspiring songwriter who is mainly focusing on lyrical content for now (also looking for a writing partner if you like what you see) as I have some learning to do both on guitar and other various instruments. Would love some feedback on the two songs I have posted so far, will be updating constantly as I continue to write. Also, despite how I may be criticized for this, does anyone have any advice/suggestions/help on names of writing houses and production companies that hire lyricists or how to sell my music? Sorry, just realized I can't post a link...please see one of my songs below Hello. it’s been a while since we spoke the silence may not have broke unless I wrote I’ve lost the words to say you’ve always had my tongue that way and I’m still sorry for the time I said “I love you” I remember every day when your face lay on my chest how you used to laugh at how fast my heart was racing it seems our time is over now it tears my soul to pieces how we were never alone on the dance floor every night when I rest my head even though it’s not you next to me in bed it’s you who I am thinking of out of sight on my mind I recall every kiss even every time you dipped to avoid my lips and that time you made me throw rocks at your window in the rain I still hurt inside that every prize I kept of you had to be destroyed as if our being one was crumpled up and treated as a story on the cutting floor it seems our time is over now it tears my soul to pieces how we were never alone on the dance floor every night when I rest my head even though it’s not you next to me in bed it’s you who I am thinking of out of sight on my mind remember me please don’t treat me as a misplaced memory I can’t stand to be a portrait collecting dust on your vanity please remember me |
11-16-2012, 09:31 PM | #2 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Greater Philadelphia Area
Posts: 3
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You have some really interesting lines, and I like how you make them flow.
this part is so wonderful.... it seems our time is over now it tears my soul to pieces how we were never alone on the dance floor
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