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Old 10-26-2012, 03:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
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So this is my first attempt at writing something and keeping it and what not.

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Saw you reading a little book of sex tricks
Remember when you used to give me sex tips
Remember when making love was so electric
Do you remember my first time
You gave me all those cute signs
I bet you wish you could forget it

Boy it was so bad
Oh so oh so bad
And I don't know why

I always thought sex was
more than complex rhythms
a little bit of love and
some sentimental romance
I just don't understand it
I really just don't get it

Boy it sure is sad
Oh so oh so sad
And I don't know why

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so its not really done but some feedback on what i have would be really appreciated!!
thanks

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