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10-13-2012, 02:30 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Waterford city Ireland
Posts: 15
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Diabolical love(50 shades of blue)
hello this is my first song i've actually writing hpe y'all like it.
gimmy yer honest reviews. hope people will enjoy it.  (verse 1) i've been repeatedly mind f"^*ed. and my emotions have being defiled. my hearts been broken, and the shards lie in a in a miniscole pile. (course) i used to view you as as an angel, sent from above. but just like a famme fatal you showed me diabolic love. you have no idea how much pain i'm going through, you have me feeling 50 shades of blue. (verse 2) our friendship was a thing of excellence. but now i'm injecting myself with pestilence. and as the life slowly leaves my eyes. you plant a kiss upon my lips and then you start to cry. (course) (bridge) it's to late to love me now cause our friendships become a train wreck it's to late to save me now cause the noose is already around my neck. (solo) (verse) writing by: Sephocia Krugar Last edited by Padjo1986; 10-13-2012 at 06:22 PM. |
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10-14-2012, 08:57 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Waterford city Ireland
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from friends to solemates
here's another one of my songs please give me yee'r opinions on it
(verse1) are we sole mates or friends with benefits all i really know is my heart skips a beat every time we kiss. you looked into my eyes and said i love you. i took you by the hand and said i loved you too. (chorus) i can't believe we're giving love a chance and turning our friendship into a proper romance. (verse2) here you are handing me the key to heart and i swear to you we'll stay together till death do us part. i put my arms around your neck you put your fingers through my hair and our hearts beat in sequence as love filled the air. (chorus) (bridge) through loves first kiss can be pure bliss but a kiss with tongue is way more fun(repete 3-4 times) (solo) are we sole mates or friends wit benefits all i relly know is my heart skips a beat ever time we kiss i can't believe we're giving true love a chance and turning our friendship into a proper romance writing by Sephocia Krugar |
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10-14-2012, 09:01 AM
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The Sexual Intellectual
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Somewhere cooler than you
Posts: 18,605
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Please stick to keeping all your stuff into one thread.
Cheers.
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10-18-2012, 01:55 PM
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The Sexual Intellectual
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Somewhere cooler than you
Posts: 18,605
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That's because I moved it here.
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