Diabolical love(50 shades of blue)
 

hello this is my first song i've actually writing hpe y'all like it.
gimmy yer honest reviews. hope people will enjoy it. :)

(verse 1)
i've been repeatedly mind f"^*ed.
and my emotions have being defiled.
my hearts been broken,
and the shards lie in a in a miniscole pile.
(course)
i used to view you as as an angel, sent from above.
but just like a famme fatal you showed me diabolic love.
you have no idea how much pain i'm going through,
you have me feeling 50 shades of blue.
(verse 2)
our friendship was a thing of excellence.
but now i'm injecting myself with pestilence.
and as the life slowly leaves my eyes.
you plant a kiss upon my lips
and then you start to cry.

(course)
(bridge)
it's to late to love me now
cause our friendships become a train wreck
it's to late to save me now
cause the noose is already around my neck.
(solo)
(verse)

writing by: Sephocia Krugar

from friends to solemates
 

here's another one of my songs please give me yee'r opinions on it

(verse1)
are we sole mates or friends with benefits
all i really know is my heart skips a beat every time we kiss.
you looked into my eyes and said i love you.
i took you by the hand and said i loved you too.

(chorus)

i can't believe we're giving love a chance
and turning our friendship into a proper romance.

(verse2)
here you are handing me the key to heart
and i swear to you we'll stay together till death do us part.
i put my arms around your neck
you put your fingers through my hair
and our hearts beat in sequence
as love filled the air.
(chorus)
(bridge)
through loves first kiss
can be pure bliss
but a kiss with tongue
is way more fun(repete 3-4 times)

(solo)

are we sole mates or friends wit benefits
all i relly know is my heart skips a beat ever time we kiss

i can't believe we're giving true love a chance
and turning our friendship into a proper romance

writing by Sephocia Krugar

Please stick to keeping all your stuff into one thread.

Cheers.

but both songs are in the one tread

That's because I moved it here.

kk sorry i'll try keep them all in one tread for now on