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Old 08-04-2012, 11:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Ok here we go! Feed back for new song lyrics?

So just started a new acoustic project, tonnns of songs. This will be the first one released. Here are the lyrics, any feed back would be appreciated!

So your life long dreams to be an astronaut, or your dreams to rob a bank and never get caught, so you dream of flying up so high, keep on dreaming until you can touch the sky. (V1)

Im a simple man to 25 years old, sometime life gets tough and my heart grows so cold, I listen to the trees and feel the cool nights air, then I tell my self someday im gonna get there.(V2)

(Chorus)
You gotta believe, you gotta be strong, or the souther winds will carry you back home.

Oh, you mus'nt be scared, there's no need to run. Just take my hand, ill lead you back home, back home.

(V3)

So your dreams to be an inspiring writer, or to battle fierce blazing fires, maybe to compose a beautiful song, or to fish the seas and let the wind blow you along.

(V4)

Im a simple man of 25 years old, an open book of stories yet untold, im like a picture book with no words or no meaning, and when you reach the end, im asleep and dreaming.

Chorus

You gotta believe, you gotta be strong, or the souther winds will carry you back home.

Oh, you mus'nt be scared, there's no need to run. Just take my hand, ill lead you back home, back home.



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Any feed back appreciated. Thanks.
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