First attempt at writing a rap song.

[scooby]

We are all apart of the same species.
So why are there people being blown to pieces
and people doing worst things than what judas did to jesus
but you wont turn on the right channel to see this.
Why are the number of bombs in the world increasing,
and the number of jobs in the market decreasing?

You spend your money on weed.
but at the end of the week you cant afford to pay the bills you need.
I'm only trying promote peace,
but it will never be enough to stop the governments greed.
Thats why our taxes go to the police,
the ones causing us to internally bleed.

I'm only nineteen,
but I'm smart enough to realize your brainwashed by your widescreen.
If you want to be released,
your going to have to stand up and fight for world peace.

Israel and US doesnt want Iran to have nuclear wepons.
but they have enough to send the world to heaven.
And dont get me started on the 5 israelies arrested on september 11.

Any feedback would be appreciated, this was my first attempt.
P.S. not looking to debate my political beliefs.