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Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 06:21 AM

Looking for feed back
 
Tear down the walls
And let me near you
I hear your call
I will save you
I'll catch your fall
And be there for you
You'll get it all
Like you deserve to

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Your a beautiful girl
An angel in my eyes
You deserve the world
Instead of my lies
Trust is something you earn
Love it sometimes can burn
Time to give me a turn
Cause I've lived
And I've learned

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Give me a chance
To show that I've changed
You can lean on me
I'll keep you sane
Help carry your burden
Take all of your pain
Let me be your sun
And Let go of the rain

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Your a beautiful girl
A angel in my eyes
You deserve the world
Instead of my lies
Trust is something You earn
Love it sometimes can burn
Time to give me a turn
Cause I've lived
And I've learned

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All you need is my warm embrace
To stay fear in the face
Climb the highest mountain
Win the longest race
I will show you the way
I wiill guide you along
No more guessing my love
Feels to good to be wrong

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Your a beautiful girl
An angel in my eyes
You deserve the world
Instead of my lies
Trust is something you earn
Love it sometimes can burn
Time to give me a turn
Cause I've lived
And I've learned



All songs in this forum are @JCB 2012

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 06:38 AM

The demon's inside
 
I told you that I'd love you
I said that I'd be there
I get lost in your eyes
Get lost in you stare

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But something's not right
I need you by my side
The demons inside
Enough to make you cry
Enough to make me cheat
Enough to make me lie
They tear me from my baby
Yeah, they keep me from my girl
So it's time to rid these demons
Rid these demons from my world

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I know that you felt lonely
Every promise that I broke
Every time you felt second best
Every time you felt the joke
I didn't always do you right
But you never let me know
Baby your my angel
And it's time for it to show

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

But something's not right
I need you by my side
The demons inside
Enough to make you cry
Enough to make me cheat
Enough to make me lie
They tear me from my baby
Yeah, they keep me from my girl
It's time to rid these demons
Rid these demons from my world

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Waiting by the window
Waiting for my call
You deserve everything
You deserve it all
A heart full of love
A mind that is free
You'll get everything
You so beautiful to me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

But something's not right
I need you by my side
The demons inside
Enough to make you cry
Enough to make me cheat
Enough to make me lie
They tear me from my baby
Yeah, they keep from my girl
So it's time to rid these demons
Rid these demons from my world

Yeah, it's time to rid these demons
Rid these demons from my world


To my beautiful daughter, JORDAN

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 07:01 AM

Holding on
 
Girl you damaged me
Beyond repair
Lifes in disarray
I'm in despair
I won't say it's easy
But it's not that hard
To get close to me
But you feel so far

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I should have known it
We always felt apart
The way you treated me
Right from the very start
I should have known right then
But I kept

Holding on
You kept me holding on
Holding on
You kept me holding on
Holding on yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Now my life is
Out of control
Time spent with you
Has taken its toll
I'm not your lover
No I'm not your friend
Time for me to leave
This place I'm in

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I should have known it
We always felt apart
The way you treated me
Right from the very start
I should have known right then
But I kept

Holding on
You kept me holding on
Holding on
You kept me holding on
Holding on yeah,yeah,yeah,yeah

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This separation
Is long overdue
Your vow to love
It just wasn't true
You left me helpless
And feeling blue
Without a clue
Of what to do

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I should have known it
We always apart
The way you treated me
Right from the very start
I should have known right then
But I kept

Holding on
You kept me holding on
Holding on
You kept me holding on
Holding on yeah,yeah,yeah,yeah

Janszoon 07-06-2012 07:03 AM

Please keep all of your songwriting in one thread as per our rules. Thanks.

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 07:13 AM

I'm gonna change
 
Sometimes it feels like love
Could never be the same
That's when we learned to love
That's when we overcame
I love a sunny morning
Because I know the rain
And Ive got to feel your hurt
So I can know your pain

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Your pain is my pain
My pain is yours
It's time for change
Can't be the same
This gift has come my way
She's got to stay
Don't runaway
Don't runaway
I'll make this vow to you
I'm gonna change

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A lot of things are done
Lessons aren't always fun
But the hurting's got to come
Before our hearts can beat as one
I never meant to hurt you
Or to make you cry
No more doubting my love
No more asking why

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your pain is my pain
My pain is yours
Its time for change
Can't be the same
This gift has come my way
And she's got to stay
Dont runaway
Don't runaway
I'll make this vow to you
I'm gonna change

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We all want happy endings
We all love fairy tales
Your the closet I've come
Every other story fails
This ain't no Disney movie
We've learned a lesson or two
Finally found my true love
My princess in you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your pain is my pain
My pain is yours
It's time for change
Can't be the same
This gift has come my way
And she's got to stay
Don't runaway
Don't runaway
I make this vow to you
I'm gonna change

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 07:14 AM

Okay

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 08:46 AM

Constitution
 
All these lessons
They test my patience
All these arguments
All these confrontation's
Lead to trials
And tribulations
There's only one way
To fix this situation

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We made a declaration
To lead our nation
And write love
A constitution

No more confusion
No revolution
The only solution
Is to write love
A constitution
There'll be no more blues then
So our hearts can mend
Now that love has a constitution

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We all need rules
and regulations
Like a constitution
For a nation
A set of rules
To keep the order
You and I can be
The founding fathers

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We made a declaration
To lead our nation
And write love
A constitution

No more confusion
No revolution
The only solution
Is to write love
A constitution
There'll be no more blues, then
So our hearts cans mend
Now that love
Has a constitution

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Like a guide
To keep us on track
Our love has grown
We can't go back
We found a way
To make this work
No infidelity
No one gets hurt

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We made a declaration
To lead our nation
And write love
A constitution

No more confusion
No revolution
The only solution
Is to write love
A constitution
There'll be more blues, then
So our hearts can mend
Now that love
Has a constitution

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 08:58 AM

Baby, tonight
 
I'm sorry
I've been on the run
Searching
For some kind of fun
Something
To help overcome
All of
The things that I've done

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You should have been number one
I've been a bad bad son

You stay by my side
And continue the fight
You have my whole life

There's just one more thing that I'd like
Let me be your baby, tonight

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Don't worry
I'll be by your side
Let's hurry
And get on with our lives
I promise
To always make it right
I'll love you
Until the end of time

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You should have been number one
I've been a bad bad son

You stay by my side
And continue the fight
You have my whole life

There's just one more thing that I'd like
Let me be your baby, tonight

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Im trying
To always stay straight
I'm dying
Behind all this hate
Been hiding
And trying to wait
Now it's time
To change my life's fate

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You should have been number one
I've been a bad bad son

You stay by my side
And continue the fight
You have my whole life

There's just one more thing that I'd like
Let me be your baby, tonight

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 09:06 AM

No good for me
 
Shouldnt have said I do
I knew it that night
I could feel it in my heart
I could see it in your eyes
Love is lonely
This time it seems to be
I'm no good for you
And your no good for me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We've already had
Enough despair
And I can see in your eyes
That you just don't care
Like ships sailing away
We're drifting apart
I better get ready
To mend this broken heart

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shouldn't have said I do
I knew it that night
I could feel in my heart
I could see it your eyes
Love is lonely
This time it seems to be
I'm no good for you
And you no good for me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You never had my back
Never truly mine
So I knew
It was just a matter of time
He's the one
Always on your mind
I'm the one
That gets left behind

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I shouldn't have said I do
I knew it that night
I could feel it in my heart
I could see it in your eyes
Love is lonely
This time it seems to be
I'm no good for you
And your no good for me

No, I'm no good for you
And your no good for me

Blarobbarg 07-06-2012 09:14 AM

I am really mot a fan of love songs in the first place, and these are so sweet I feel like I'm getting diabetes. There's definitely a market for this sort of thing, but I personally do not like it.

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 09:22 AM

Thanks for your opinion, I really appreciate it. But you obviously didn't read them all.
Signed, insulin

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 09:45 AM

Mosquito
 
Chillin with Sheila
Marie and Frieda
You know I'm a leader
So I had to feed her
A big burrito
But before I breed her
Drank a margarita
And a couple of mojito's

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Then I'd slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Drinking at a cantina
When I seen her
A señorita
From South Covina
I approached
She said my name is Lena
My moms from mexico
Dad's Filipino

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then I slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Inside the arena
Then I seen her
I ordered a foot long
With jalapeño
She said thanks for your order
My name is Tina
The hotdog is free
If you show me your wiener

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then I slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shooting tequila
With a girl name katrina
Looks like a model
Laughs like a hyena
She licks up the salt
And turns up the glass
Bites on the lime
Then offers that ass

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then up slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 09:59 AM

So alone
 
When you touch me
Your hands feel stone
When I'm with you
I feel all alone
You behaving badly
Your mood sets the tone
You make this house
Not feel like a home

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So it's time to roam
And be on my own
I feel so alone
I feel so alone
Barely hanging on
Loves all but gone
I feel so alone
I feel so alone
This bird has flown
And Im not coming home
I feel so alone
I feel so alone

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You've treated me badly
For oh so long
You promised to love me
But hurts all that I've known
Since we've been together
Loves all that I've shown
I know that you love me
But our love has not grown

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So it's time to roam
And be on my own
I feel so alone
I feel so alone
Barely hanging on
Loves all but gone
I feel so alone
I feel so alone
This bird has flown
And I'm not coming home
I feel so alone
I feel so alone

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So alone, so alone
I feel so alone
It feels so wrong
So I ain't coming home

Johnny Longfellow 07-06-2012 10:12 AM

This time around
 
My heart is pounding
It skips a beat
When I see your face
Every time we meet
Like a sunny Sunday morning
Like a new born child
Just like Heaven's angels
When you laugh or smile

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And love......
Is so much better
This time around

It's so much better
True love I've found
I've got to keep her
Wipe off that frown
Storm the weather
To you I'm bound
We'll be together

This time around
Love is better
Yeah, this time around
Love's so much better

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I want to rock your body
I want rock your mind
I want to make you mine
All of the time
I love your big brown eyes
Your so hot, your so fine
You lips drive me crazy
My hearts on fire

And love......
Is so much better
This time around

It's so much better
True love I've found
I've got to keep her
Wipe off that frown
Storm the weather
To you I'm bound
We'll be together

This time around
Love is better
Yeah, this time around
Love's so much better

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You know I love you
Good and the bad
Yours is the best love
I've ever had
Stay by my side
as I walk down the road
Help me to steer my way
And carry the load

And love.....
Is so much better
This time around

It's so much better
True love I've found
I've got to keep her
Wipe off that frown
Storm the weather
To you I'm bound
We'll be together

This time around
Love is better
Yeah, this time around
Love's so much better

Johnny Longfellow 07-11-2012 09:18 AM

Brighter Day
 
It's a sad sad tale
Outside it's raining
And they call for hail
I'm stuck inside
My skin is pale
Time to change my life
All I do is fail

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I've done all you say
Doesn't seem to pay
Just want to be okay

There's got to be a better way

I've got to stay
Take it day by day
Live by what I say
Chase the rain away
And make a brighter day

Keep fighting
Make a brighter day
Keep searching
I'm trying to find my way
Keep working
No more time for play

It's time for the rain to end
And make a brighter day
Sometimes losers got to win
And make a brighter day

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Grey skies
Keep me down
Rain and thunder
My only sound
Blue skies
Don't seem to last
My life forever
Overcast

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I've done what they say
Doesn't seem to pay
Just want to be okay

There's got to be a better way

I've got to stay
Take it day by day
Live by what I say
And make a brighter day

Keep fighting
Make a brighter day
Keep searching
Trying to find my way
Keep working
No more time for play

It's time for the rain to end
And make a brighter day
Sometimes losers got to win
And make a brighter day

miinah-a-pun 07-20-2012 05:59 AM

all of them are nice...so honest...keep it up friend

Johnny Longfellow 08-06-2012 09:57 PM

tortured soul
 
always stuck in this hole
tortured mind, tortured soul
watch the damage grow
as torture takes its toll
no more lying, looking bold
while I'm feeling down and low
no escape, no place to go
time to fix this tortured soul

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

time to rock and time to roll
time to fix this tortured soul
I'm tired of being told
all my dreams and my goals
my heart is getting cold
all these dreams are getting old
its time to take control
and fix this tortured soul

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

sometimes its hard to know
if I'm my friend or I'm foe
I don't which way to go
all my problems seem to grow
what's the answer i don't know
life's direction's just don't flow
its been a long and winding road
so it's time to take control

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

time to rock and time to roll
time to fix this tortured soul
I'm tired of being told
all my dreams and all my goals
my heart is getting cold
all my dreams are getting old
it's time to take control
and fix this tortured soul

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

we've got to reap what we sow
but how much lower can i go
my mind's about to blow
time to end this horror show (faint gun shot in background):yikes:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

time to rock and time to roll
time to fix this tortured soul
I'm tired of being told
all my dreams and all my goals
my heart is getting cold
all these games are getting old
it's time to take control
and fix this tortured soul

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:44 PM

I follow me
 
Ive got to change
I'm going insane
Days filled with rain
My heart filled with pain
So I'll move on along
To where I belong
All on my own
Where I feel at home

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DANGER, DANGER
Yeah, I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Life seems to get stranger
Why can't I see
That I'm my worst enemy
Wherever I go
I follow me

I'll have to change
To finally be free

Cause wherever I go
That's where I'll be

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It's like I'm at war
Within myself
I see the scar's
Realize I need help
I've battled so long
I can't fight anymore
My mind is broken
And my heart is torn

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

DANGER, DANGER
Yeah, I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Life seems to get stranger
Why can't I see
That I'm my worst enemy
Wherever I go
I follow me

I'll have to change
To finally feel free

Cause wherever I go
That's where I'll be

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I can't follow the leader
Cause he lost control
All of these battles
Have taken there toll
I don't which side
That I'm fighting for
I can't remember
Why I'm at war

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

DANGER, DANGER
Yeah, I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Things seems to get stranger
Why can't I see
That I'm my worst enemy
Wherever I go
I follow me

I'll have to change
To finally be free

Cause wherever I go
That's where I'll be

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I can't run and hide
By these rules I'll abide
I pay for these lies
By this feeling inside
I can't runaway
I've got to stay
Living day by day
Is the only way

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

DANGER, DANGER
I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Life seems to get stranger
Why can't I see
That I'm my worst enemy
Wherever I go
I follow me

I'll have to change
To finally be free

Cause wherever I go
That's where I'll be

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:46 PM

Rest in peace
 
Vulture's flock where titans lie
To torture's rock condemned for size
On tortures rock your mother lies
With the goddess by her side
I saw, the titan's with my eyes
And the vulture's in the skies
While the goddess seem's so wise
Mankind's destruction is her prize

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Rest in peace
Oh mother may I
Rest in peace.

Rest in peace
Right where I lie
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
I close my eyes
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
I finally die
Rest in peace

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This might be our final ride
Unless we finally turn the tide
Man and titan's on one side
And the vultures join the fight
Mankind, titan's, vultures, rise
And they become allies
We will finally cut the ties
As the goddess finally sighs

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Rest In peace
Oh mother may I
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
Right here I lie
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
I close my eyes
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
I finally die
Rest in peace

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Prepare to fight and don't deny
To kill the goddess is our prize
By our rules she must abide
The goddess better run and hide
Judging by the titan's size
And the way the vulture flies
Now we're going to hear her cries
As the goddess finally dies

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Rest in peace
Oh mother may I
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
Right where I lie
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
I close my eyes
Rest in peace

Rest in peace
I finally die
Rest in peace

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:49 PM

Weight of the world
 
I'm getting older
Still trying to show her
And she's getting colder
The longer I know her
I can't blame, I can't scold her
Got to love and got to hold her
And remove the boulder
That rest on my shoulder's

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The weight of the world
Is coming down on me
The good and the bad
All of our memories
The everyday problem's
That not everyone see's
The weight of the world
Has come down on me

I've got to lighten my load
For me to feel free
Cause the weight of the world
Has come down on me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Look to day's that have passed
Learn my lesson's at last
Life goes to fast
Yesterday's in the past
So I'm changing my ways
Going back to better days
When Innocence paid
And I didn't have this weight

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The weight of the world
Is coming down on me
The good and the bad
All of our memories
The everyday problem's
That not everyone see's
The weight of the world
Has come down on me

I've got to lighten my load
So that I can breath
Cause the weight of the world
Has come down on me

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:51 PM

Disappear
 
You got that something
That's keeping me here
That special something
Your whisper in my ear
The touch of your lips
Seem to dry up my tears
Your love and your strength
Takes away all my fears

Your head on my pillow
Just knowing your near
Holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear
Nothing replaces
This love we have here
Holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I wake up early
When your around
constantly call you
I like your sound
I can't live with out you
Or this love that I've found
Were forever together
I wont you let you down

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You got that something
That look in your eyes
That special something
That I can't deny
The touch of you lips
Seem to dry up my tears
Your love and your strength
Take away all my fears

Your head on my pillow
Just knowing you near
Holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear
Nothing replaces
This love we have here
But holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your laugh and your smile
Take away all my trials
your look and your style
Make it all worth while
You know that I love you
You know that I'm true
Without you I'm blue
I don't know what to do

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You got that something
That keeps me around
That special something
That I've never found
The touch of your lips
Seem to dry up my tears
Your love and your strength
Take away all my fears

Your head on my pillow
Just knowing you near
Holding you close
makes the hurt Disappear
Nothing replace's
The love we have here
But holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:52 PM

All of the time
 
Your like a toddler
full of drama
with her momma

Im like a scholar
with a collar
at a parlor

Twenty dollars
make you holler
and you want more

Like the ho
by the door
of the crack store

I'm the man
And now
you know

So tell me
how low
That you can go

On the bed
On the desk
The motel floor

Then nuts
Will be bust
that's for sure

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Female voice (Island)

I want your body, baby
I want your mind
I want to make you my babe
All of the time
I like your style
The way you rhyme
Your songs play in my head
All of the time
do what you want
Cause your so fine
I want you on that booty
All of the time

And the way that you kiss
And the touch of your lips
And the feel
of your finger tips
As they rest
on my hips (hips/hips/hips/hips)

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That girl
Get down
in a new car

For sure
Back room
at the town bar

Need a cure
For his unpure
daughter

Having sex
by the water
when he caught her

A better
Father
Woulda taught her

She's worth
More
Than a quarter

But now
To many
Have bought her

No more
Innocent
Daughter

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I want your body, baby
I want your mind
I want to make you my babe
All of time
I like your style
The way you rhyme
Your songs play in my head
All of the time
Do what you want
Cause your so fine
I want you on that booty
All of the time

And the way that you kiss
And the touch of your lips
And the feel
of your finger tips
As they rest
on my hips (hips/hips/hips/hips)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Rock star
Going to rock,
going to roll her

Make her crack
Mind attack,
bipolar

Sex star
At the bar
Going to show ya

Like a porn star
With your legs
on my shoulders

I'm the man
With the plan
Casanova

Not a wimp
Just a pimp
I'm a soldier

Don't hate
It's much to late
To try and mold her

She's getting older
And you know
I got scold her

But
I've already
told her

Her pimp
already
sold her

head's hard
just like
a boulder

Nobody
can
control her

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:54 PM

Sexy-n-affect
 
Lordy, Lordy
look at shorty
Getting naughty
at the party
I wish somebody
would have warned me
Chicks get horny
after forty

Then she started
To get retarded
I retreated
I got cornered
Next she grab me
And she kissed
Said that all her life
She's missed me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

What do you expect
When you got sexy in affect
Let's get a room, but not to rest
Let's have sex at the express

I've heard that you're the best
And from your looks, you pass the test
You put all them boy's to rest
Cause you got sexy in affect

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Let's go up to the room
I'll get all up in that womb
This bed might be my tomb
This girl might spell my doom
I'll make you feel at home
With the position you'll assume
Yeah, you'll be coming soon
Girl, I take you to the moon

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

What do you expect
When you got sexy in affect
Let's get a room, but not to rest
Let's have sex at the express

I've heard that your the best
And from your looks you pass the test
You put all them boy's to rest
Cause you got sexy in affect

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Now I'm finished
I roll over
She thinks she got
The cold shoulder
guess I'm not like
your friends told you
disrespected
I won't hold her

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

What do you expect
When you got sexy in affect
Let's get a room, but not to rest
Let's have sex at the express

I've heard that your the best
And from your looks you pass the test
You put all them boy's to rest
Cause you got sexy in affect

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:55 PM

Dance with the devil
 
You know I'm a rebel
But I'm getting old
I've danced with the devil
And he stole my soul
I'll need a shovel
To dig out of this hole
Cause the hand of the devil
Has taken a hold

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I've dance with the devil
Now I'm taking the lead
I'm ready to rumble
And take back what I need
Roll up my sleeves
And fight for my soul
Cause this dance with the devil
Is taking its toll

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I was a leader
But I've lost control
This heart was loving
But it's getting cold
So it's time to listen
And do as I'm told
Cause the hand of the devil
Has taken a hold

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I've danced with the devil
Now I'm taking the lead
I'm ready to rumble
And take back what I need
Roll up my sleeves
And fight for my soul
Cause this dance with the devil
Is taking its toll

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm not a angel
But I'll play the role
My faith and my morales
Are among what I've sold
this time I'm all in
No, I'm not going to fold
Cause the hand of the devil
Has taken a hold

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I've danced with the devil
Now I'm taking the lead
I'm ready to rumble
And take back what I need
Roll up my sleeves
And fight for my soul
Cause this dance with the devil
Is taking its toll

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 07:57 PM

Bushwhacker
 
Bushwhacker, I got a pretty sack
Shaved down, to my ass crack
Smooth and silky, pubes are whack
Clean and bald, from the front to the back

Nutcracker, I got some handsome nut's
Shaved up, just like my butt
Bushwhacked, say what
Sharp razor's, deep cut's

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

(music and singing similar to The Eagles HOTEL CALIFORNIA-ladies voice)

No more trees in your forest
There's no fur on your bear
Bush whacking your body
Shaving all your hair
I want my tongue to flow smoothly
When I venture there
Bush whacking your body
and leaving you bare

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bushwhacker, I got a pretty sack
Shaved down, to my ass crack
Smooth and silky, pubes are whack
Clean and bald, just hair I lack

Backstabber, don't stab my back
Watch the razor, around my nut sack
Super freaky, you know i like that
shaved up from the front to the back

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

No more trees in your forest
There's no fur on your bear
Bush whacking your body
Shaving all your hair
I want my tongue to flow smoothly
When I venture there
Bush whacking your body
And leaving you bare

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lip smacker, I hear your lips smack
When you suck on my nut sack
Feels good, from front to back
Rub that tongue, from nut sack to ass crack

Big packer, you know what I pack
Big package, intact
Long and bald, smooth and fat
Now my doggy
Resembles your bald cat

Johnny Longfellow 08-16-2012 08:27 PM

Toolbox
 
All up on that trampster
Like a wheel and a hamster
Bout to bam, bout to ram her
Bout to slam her, like a hammer

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bout to nail her, like a nail
Going screw her, like a screw
Bout to put her in her place
Cause you know how I do

Bout to bolt her to the wall
Make her black and blue
Bout to fix that ass
With everyone of my tools

Bout to chain her to the bench
Going to lock her with a lock
Use every tool
In my toolbox

Bring wood to the woods
Bout to hunt that fox
Use every tool
In my toolbox

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tightening that grip
Just like a wrench
Bout to measure with that tape
Use every inch
You saw what you saw
Up in my tool chest
you saw a lot of tools
But my tools the best

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bout to nail her, like a nail
Going to screw her, like a screw
Bout to put her in her place
Cause you know how I do

Bout to bolt her to the wall
Make her black and blue
Bout to fix that ass
With everyone of my tools

Bout to chain her to bench
Going lock her with a lock
Use every tool
In my toolbox

Bring wood to woods
Bout to hunt that fox
Use every tool
In my toolbox

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bout to nail her, like a nail
Going to screw her like a screw
Bout to put her in place
Cause you know how I do

Bout to bolt her to wall
Make her black and blue
Repair that ass
With everyone of my tools

Bout to chain her to the bench
Bout to lock her, with the lock
Use every tool
In my toolbox

Bring wood to the woods
Bout to hunt that fox
Use every tool
In my toolbox

bayleegrl88 08-18-2012 01:45 AM

you have some real talent, keep up the good work :)

Johnny Longfellow 08-18-2012 06:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bayleegrl88 (Post 1220057)
you have some real talent, keep up the good work :)

Thanks a lot, sometimes I take all the views with no response as a negative thing. Positive feedback really helps:band:

Johnny Longfellow 08-18-2012 08:37 PM

252 Life
 
Boulevard of broken dreams
Locked behind these bars
I hear the sound of screams
Prison life's so hard
I hear the door shut
As I fall further down
I'm stuck in this rut
And I'm securely bound

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Too many men have tried
Anything to survive
Too many men have died
25 to life

I'm locked up in this cell
Everyday and every night
Need to escape this hell
25 to life

My future is in doubt
My life is filled with strife
Why did I choose this route
25 to life

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Three strikes and your out
Three strikes and I'm in
My future is in doubt
And my future's Grimm
Where did I go wrong
Why did I sin
My life is over
Time for it to end

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Too many men have tried
Anything to survive
Too many men have died
25 to life

I'm locked up in this cell
Everyday and every night
Need to escape this hell
25 to life

My future is in doubt
My life is filled with strife
Why did I choose this route
25 to life

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

All i want is freedom
I don't want to live
what kind of life is this
Nothing more to give
I can not trust a soul
No one is my friend
Here I wait all alone
Hoping for the end

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Too many man have tried
Anything to survive
Too many man have died
25 to life

I'm locked up in this cell
Everyday and every night
Need to escape this hell
25 to life

My future is in doubt
My life is filled with strife
Why did I choose this route
25 to life

Johnny Longfellow 08-18-2012 08:39 PM

How lucky you are
 
Put your ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say goodbye to the stranger
And get back in the car
These feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just don't know
How lucky you are

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm not a scholar
No, I don't always win
But I'm not stupid
You'll see in the end
You let him kiss you
While I was at home
Baby, I missed you
And felt all alone

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Put you ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say good bye to the stranger
And get back in the car
these feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just don't know
How lucky you are

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I don't have a million dollars
I can't buy you diamond rings
But baby, I love you
And that's why I sing
I know that it seems like
it's not a big thing
But baby I feel Like
My hearts in a sling

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Put your ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say goodbye to the stranger
And get back in the car
these feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just know
How lucky you are

Johnny Longfellow 08-18-2012 08:40 PM

Take me away
 
When I was young
Things were much easier
When I was small
Things were alright
Now that I've grown
I stay up worrying
Now that I'm older
I worry all night

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So take me away
From what's bothering me
Take me away
Away from myself
Help me to learn
teach me to accept
Take me away
Please, I need your help

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

My younger days
We're so easy
When I was a child
Life was a breeze
My golden years
Have been so hard on me
The door is locked
And I've lost the keys

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So take me away
From what's bothering me
Take me away
Away from myself
Help me to learn
Teach me to accept
Take me away
Please, I need your help

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

All this stress
Affects my rest
And I accept
Much less than my best
I'll have to work harder
I guess
To get the respect
I expect

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So take me away
From what's bothering me
Take me away
Away from myself
Help me to learn
Teach me to accept
Take me away
Please, I need your help

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 11:58 AM

Walked out on me
 
Why won't you love me
My love is so true
I don't deserve
The things that you do
But I am still waiting
Here, crying alone
Hopelessly for you
To come back home

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm falling to pieces
You're breaking me down
I'm losing my mind
Now that your not around

My heart is heavy
Yeah, I can barely breathe
Life is so empty
Since you walked out on me

my life is so empty
Since you walked out on me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

What was the reason
Why did you go
You promised to love me
But you hurt me so
I may be crazy
But it's the way that I am
I am still waiting
You don't give a damn

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm falling to pieces
You're breaking me down
I'm losing my mind
Now that your not around

My heart is heavy
Yeah, I can barely breath. -yeah
Life is so empty
Since you walked out on me

my life is so empty
Since you walked out on me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm really special.
In time you will see
You were so lucky
That you had me
Now I'm tired of waiting
And you failed the test
One day you'll see
That you lost the best

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I'm falling to pieces
You're breaking me down
I'm losing my mind
Now that your not around

My heart is heavy
Yeah, I can barely breath
Life is so empty
Since you walked out on me

my life is so empty
Since you walked out on me

©JCB 2012





(Alternate ending)


Now you're falling to pieces
I'm breaking down
You're losing your mind
Now that I'm not around

Your heart is heavy
Yeah, you can barely breath
Your life is so empty


Since you don't have me
your life is so empty

Since you won't have me

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 11:59 AM

Needle in my vein
 
All my life I've cried
Ive been wondering why
No matter how hard I try
I can't stop getting high

When I look in my eyes
It's gets me terrified
Under beautiful skies
Still hoping to die

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Demon's in my brain
They're driving me insane
Going down the wrong lane
Needle in my vein

Devil's in my heart
And he's tearing me apart
I can't take the pain
Needle in my vein

I'm living in shame
No one but myself to blame
It's time for me to change
Needle in my vein

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This needle in my vein
It feels good for a while
I don't feel the pain
life don't seem so vile

it never seems to last
Misery always comes back
Pleasure goes so fast
I'm back under attack

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Demon's in my brain
They're driving me insane
Down the wrong lane
Needle in my vein

Devil's in my heart
And he's tearing me apart
I can't take the pain
Needle in my vein

I'm living in shame
No one but myself to blame
It's time for me to change
Needle in my vein

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

All I've overcome
I'm no longer numb
Now my life beats
To a different drum

I don't feel the same
I don't feel the pain
There's no more needle
Inside of my vein

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Demon's in my brain
They're driving me insane
Down the wrong lane
Needle in my vein

Devil's in my heart
And he's tearing me apart
I can't take the pain
Needle in my vein

I'm living in shame
No one but myself to blame
It's time for me to change
Needle in my vein

©JCB 2012

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 12:00 PM

I follow me
 
It's time for change
I'm going insane
Days filled with rain
My heart filled with pain

So I'll move on along
To where I belong
All on my own
Where I feel at home

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

DANGER, DANGER
Yeah, I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Life seems to get stranger

Why can't I see
I'm my worst enemy
And wherever I go
I follow me
So I'll have to change
To finally feel free

Cause wherever I go
I follow me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It's like I'm at war
Within myself
I see the scar's
And realize I need help

I've battled so long
I can't fight anymore
My mind is broken
And my heart is torn

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

DANGER, DANGER
Yeah, I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Life seems to get stranger

Why can't I see
I'm my worst enemy
And wherever I go
I follow me
So I'll have to change
To finally feel free

Cause wherever I go
I follow me


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I pay for these lies
By this feeling inside
I can't run and hide
Cause I stay by my side

So, it's time to stay
No, I can't runaway
Living, day by day
Is the only way

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

DANGER, DANGER
Yeah, I'm in danger
And the longer I live
Life seems to get stranger

Why can't I see
I'm my worst enemy
And wherever I go
I follow me
So I'll have to change
To finally feel free

Cause wherever I go
I follow me

©JCB 2012

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 12:01 PM

How lucky you are
 
🎶Genres: 🎤Country


Put your ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say goodbye to the stranger
And get back in the car

These feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just don't know
How lucky you are

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm not a scholar
I don't always win
But I'm a fighter
You'll see in the end
No, I won't give up
Just that easily
You'll have to do
A lot more to me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Put you ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say good bye to the stranger
And get back in the car

These feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just don't know
How lucky you are

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I don't have a million dollars
I can't afford the finer things
But baby I love you
And that's why I sing
I know that it seems
like it's not a big thing
But baby I feel like
My hearts in a sling

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Put your ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say goodbye to the stranger
And get back in the car
these feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just know
How lucky you are

©JCB 2012

blastingas10 09-19-2012 12:19 PM

You're really spitting these things out like Dylan. Id say stick to the country thing. Those lyrics are as good as anything I hear on pop country radio stations. It's an easy formula to follow.

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 04:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blastingas10 (Post 1232609)
You're really spitting these things out like Dylan. Id say stick to the country thing. Those lyrics are as good as anything I hear on pop country radio stations. It's an easy formula to follow.

Thank a lot. I really appreciate it. Lots of problems/ trouble makes for good material

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 04:05 PM

Silver lining
 
Now the storm has passed
And the sun is shining
All you've done for me
Girl, your a fine thing

We've grown along the way
Cause the roads been winding
your still here with me
I see your word is binding

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

There's a silver lining
In back of the clouds
It'll all be worth it
gonna make you proud

I've learned a lot lessons
lost a lot of respect
I'm gonna be that person
The man you expect

At the end of the storm
You get all my heart
This silver lining
Brings a brand new start

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I could barely see
The pain's been blinding
no longer overcast
Your love is guiding

But now I finally see
And with perfect timing
I will find our way
Find a silver lining

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

There's a silver lining
In back of the clouds
It'll all be worth it
gonna make you proud

I've learned a lot lessons
lost a lot of respect
I'm gonna be that person
The man you expect

At the end of the storm
You get all my heart
This silver lining
Brings a brand new start

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I made a lot of mistakes
But I'm finally finding
Behind every cloud
There's a silver lining

No, we're not perfect
But I'm not whining
Behind every cloud
There's a silver lining

Now the rain is gone
And the sun is shining
Behind every cloud
There's a silver lining

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
There's a silver lining
In back of the clouds
It'll all be worth it
gonna make you proud

I've learned a lot of lessons
lost a lot of respect
I'm gonna be that person
The man you expect

At the end of the storm
You get all my heart
This silver lining
Brings a brand new start



©JCB 2012

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 04:07 PM

Why would I love you
 
I can't follow your lead
Cause you've lost control
All of our battles
Have taken there toll

I don't which side
That I'm fighting for
There's is no winner
When love is at war

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Why would I love you
Your always so mad
I must be confused
I've been treated so bad

I've been mentally abused
And wrongly accused
I feel so used
Why would I love you

Why, tell me why
Why would I love you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

All the breakdowns, I've had
I can't take it anymore
Cause your always mad
What are you mad for

What did I do
To be treated this way
Time for me to go
And fight another day

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Why would I love you
Your always so mad
I must be confused
I've been treated so bad

Ive been mentally abused
And wrongly accused
I feel so used
Why would I love you

Why, tell me why
Why would I love

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This time I'm leaving
I won't be back
So tired of feeling
Under attack

I know you'll be sorry
I know you'll regret
That you treated me badly
You didn't pay me respect

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Why would I love you
Your always so mad
I must be confused
I've been treated so bad

Ive been mentally abused
And wrongly accused
I feel so used
Why would I love you

Why, tell me why
Why would I love you

Why, tell me why
Why would I love you


©JCB 2012

Johnny Longfellow 09-19-2012 04:08 PM

Loser
 
Your shattered spirit
Is just the start
Your broken dreams
Weigh down on my heart

Girl, I let you down
I hurt you so bad
I ruined the best love
That I've ever had

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I am a loser
A loser at love
I lost an angel
Sent from above

I lost the best girl
That there ever was
I am a loser
A loser at love

I am a loser
A loser at love
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

A beautiful flower
That's lost all it's petals
Dealing with me
You deserve a medal

I'm just no good
You're just to great
Took your loving heart
And turned it to hate

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I am a loser
A loser at love
I lost an angel
Sent from above

I lost the best girl
That there ever was
I am a loser
A loser at love

I am a loser
A loser at love

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'd love another chance
But I know it's to late
I destroyed your feelings
And you lost all fate

Why did I gamble
Why your fragile heart
I should have folded
Right from the start

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I am a loser
A loser at love
I lost an Angel
Sent from above

I lost the best girl
That there ever was
I am a loser
A loser at love

I am a loser
A loser at love



©JCB 2012


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