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Johnny Longfellow · 07-06-2012, 08:46 AM

All these lessons
They test my patience
All these arguments
All these confrontation's
Lead to trials
And tribulations
There's only one way
To fix this situation

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We made a declaration
To lead our nation
And write love
A constitution

No more confusion
No revolution
The only solution
Is to write love
A constitution
There'll be no more blues then
So our hearts can mend
Now that love has a constitution

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We all need rules
and regulations
Like a constitution
For a nation
A set of rules
To keep the order
You and I can be
The founding fathers

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We made a declaration
To lead our nation
And write love
A constitution

No more confusion
No revolution
The only solution
Is to write love
A constitution
There'll be no more blues, then
So our hearts cans mend
Now that love
Has a constitution

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Like a guide
To keep us on track
Our love has grown
We can't go back
We found a way
To make this work
No infidelity
No one gets hurt

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We made a declaration
To lead our nation
And write love
A constitution

No more confusion
No revolution
The only solution
Is to write love
A constitution
There'll be more blues, then
So our hearts can mend
Now that love
Has a constitution

Johnny Longfellow · 07-06-2012, 08:58 AM

I'm sorry
I've been on the run
Searching
For some kind of fun
Something
To help overcome
All of
The things that I've done

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You should have been number one
I've been a bad bad son

You stay by my side
And continue the fight
You have my whole life

There's just one more thing that I'd like
Let me be your baby, tonight

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Don't worry
I'll be by your side
Let's hurry
And get on with our lives
I promise
To always make it right
I'll love you
Until the end of time

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You should have been number one
I've been a bad bad son

You stay by my side
And continue the fight
You have my whole life

There's just one more thing that I'd like
Let me be your baby, tonight

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Im trying
To always stay straight
I'm dying
Behind all this hate
Been hiding
And trying to wait
Now it's time
To change my life's fate

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You should have been number one
I've been a bad bad son

You stay by my side
And continue the fight
You have my whole life

There's just one more thing that I'd like
Let me be your baby, tonight

Johnny Longfellow · 07-06-2012, 09:06 AM

Shouldnt have said I do
I knew it that night
I could feel it in my heart
I could see it in your eyes
Love is lonely
This time it seems to be
I'm no good for you
And your no good for me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We've already had
Enough despair
And I can see in your eyes
That you just don't care
Like ships sailing away
We're drifting apart
I better get ready
To mend this broken heart

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shouldn't have said I do
I knew it that night
I could feel in my heart
I could see it your eyes
Love is lonely
This time it seems to be
I'm no good for you
And you no good for me

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You never had my back
Never truly mine
So I knew
It was just a matter of time
He's the one
Always on your mind
I'm the one
That gets left behind

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I shouldn't have said I do
I knew it that night
I could feel it in my heart
I could see it in your eyes
Love is lonely
This time it seems to be
I'm no good for you
And your no good for me

No, I'm no good for you
And your no good for me

Blarobbarg · 07-06-2012, 09:14 AM

I am really mot a fan of love songs in the first place, and these are so sweet I feel like I'm getting diabetes. There's definitely a market for this sort of thing, but I personally do not like it.

Johnny Longfellow · 07-06-2012, 09:45 AM

Chillin with Sheila
Marie and Frieda
You know I'm a leader
So I had to feed her
A big burrito
But before I breed her
Drank a margarita
And a couple of mojito's

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then I'd slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Drinking at a cantina
When I seen her
A señorita
From South Covina
I approached
She said my name is Lena
My moms from mexico
Dad's Filipino

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then I slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Inside the arena
Then I seen her
I ordered a foot long
With jalapeño
She said thanks for your order
My name is Tina
The hotdog is free
If you show me your wiener

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then I slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shooting tequila
With a girl name katrina
Looks like a model
Laughs like a hyena
She licks up the salt
And turns up the glass
Bites on the lime
Then offers that ass

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then up slid up next to her
Then I slid up on in her
Just like a mosquito
Fast like a cheetah
Sing and dance like a Beiber
I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito
Yeah, I gave her the fever
Stung her like a mosquito

07-06-2012, 08:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
Johnny Longfellow Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 44	Constitution All these lessons They test my patience All these arguments All these confrontation's Lead to trials And tribulations There's only one way To fix this situation ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We made a declaration To lead our nation And write love A constitution No more confusion No revolution The only solution Is to write love A constitution There'll be no more blues then So our hearts can mend Now that love has a constitution ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We all need rules and regulations Like a constitution For a nation A set of rules To keep the order You and I can be The founding fathers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We made a declaration To lead our nation And write love A constitution No more confusion No revolution The only solution Is to write love A constitution There'll be no more blues, then So our hearts cans mend Now that love Has a constitution ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Like a guide To keep us on track Our love has grown We can't go back We found a way To make this work No infidelity No one gets hurt ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We made a declaration To lead our nation And write love A constitution No more confusion No revolution The only solution Is to write love A constitution There'll be more blues, then So our hearts can mend Now that love Has a constitution Last edited by Johnny Longfellow; 08-18-2012 at 09:31 PM.

07-06-2012, 08:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
Johnny Longfellow Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 44	Baby, tonight I'm sorry I've been on the run Searching For some kind of fun Something To help overcome All of The things that I've done ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You should have been number one I've been a bad bad son You stay by my side And continue the fight You have my whole life There's just one more thing that I'd like Let me be your baby, tonight ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Don't worry I'll be by your side Let's hurry And get on with our lives I promise To always make it right I'll love you Until the end of time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You should have been number one I've been a bad bad son You stay by my side And continue the fight You have my whole life There's just one more thing that I'd like Let me be your baby, tonight ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Im trying To always stay straight I'm dying Behind all this hate Been hiding And trying to wait Now it's time To change my life's fate ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You should have been number one I've been a bad bad son You stay by my side And continue the fight You have my whole life There's just one more thing that I'd like Let me be your baby, tonight Last edited by Johnny Longfellow; 08-18-2012 at 09:34 PM.

07-06-2012, 09:06 AM	#3 (permalink)
Johnny Longfellow Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 44	No good for me Shouldnt have said I do I knew it that night I could feel it in my heart I could see it in your eyes Love is lonely This time it seems to be I'm no good for you And your no good for me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We've already had Enough despair And I can see in your eyes That you just don't care Like ships sailing away We're drifting apart I better get ready To mend this broken heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Shouldn't have said I do I knew it that night I could feel in my heart I could see it your eyes Love is lonely This time it seems to be I'm no good for you And you no good for me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You never had my back Never truly mine So I knew It was just a matter of time He's the one Always on your mind I'm the one That gets left behind ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I shouldn't have said I do I knew it that night I could feel it in my heart I could see it in your eyes Love is lonely This time it seems to be I'm no good for you And your no good for me No, I'm no good for you And your no good for me Last edited by Johnny Longfellow; 08-18-2012 at 09:35 PM.

07-06-2012, 09:14 AM	#4 (permalink)
Blarobbarg Do good. Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Minneapolis, Minnesota Posts: 2,065	I am really mot a fan of love songs in the first place, and these are so sweet I feel like I'm getting diabetes. There's definitely a market for this sort of thing, but I personally do not like it. __________________ https://rateyourmusic.com/~Blarobbarg ｡･::･ﾟ★,｡･::･ﾟ☆　^my RYM^　｡･::･ﾟ★,｡･::･ﾟ☆ (◠‿◠✿)

07-06-2012, 09:45 AM	#5 (permalink)
Johnny Longfellow Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 44	Mosquito Chillin with Sheila Marie and Frieda You know I'm a leader So I had to feed her A big burrito But before I breed her Drank a margarita And a couple of mojito's ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Then I'd slid up next to her Then I slid up on in her Just like a mosquito Fast like a cheetah Sing and dance like a Beiber I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito Yeah, I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Drinking at a cantina When I seen her A señorita From South Covina I approached She said my name is Lena My moms from mexico Dad's Filipino ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Then I slid up next to her Then I slid up on in her Just like a mosquito Fast like a cheetah Sing and dance like a Beiber I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito Yeah, I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Inside the arena Then I seen her I ordered a foot long With jalapeño She said thanks for your order My name is Tina The hotdog is free If you show me your wiener ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Then I slid up next to her Then I slid up on in her Just like a mosquito Fast like a cheetah Sing and dance like a Beiber I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito Yeah, I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Shooting tequila With a girl name katrina Looks like a model Laughs like a hyena She licks up the salt And turns up the glass Bites on the lime Then offers that ass ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Then up slid up next to her Then I slid up on in her Just like a mosquito Fast like a cheetah Sing and dance like a Beiber I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito Yeah, I gave her the fever Stung her like a mosquito Last edited by Johnny Longfellow; 08-18-2012 at 09:10 PM.