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Old 08-16-2012, 08:51 PM   #21 (permalink)
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You got that something
That's keeping me here
That special something
Your whisper in my ear
The touch of your lips
Seem to dry up my tears
Your love and your strength
Takes away all my fears

Your head on my pillow
Just knowing your near
Holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear
Nothing replaces
This love we have here
Holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I wake up early
When your around
constantly call you
I like your sound
I can't live with out you
Or this love that I've found
Were forever together
I wont you let you down

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You got that something
That look in your eyes
That special something
That I can't deny
The touch of you lips
Seem to dry up my tears
Your love and your strength
Take away all my fears

Your head on my pillow
Just knowing you near
Holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear
Nothing replaces
This love we have here
But holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your laugh and your smile
Take away all my trials
your look and your style
Make it all worth while
You know that I love you
You know that I'm true
Without you I'm blue
I don't know what to do

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You got that something
That keeps me around
That special something
That I've never found
The touch of your lips
Seem to dry up my tears
Your love and your strength
Take away all my fears

Your head on my pillow
Just knowing you near
Holding you close
makes the hurt Disappear
Nothing replace's
The love we have here
But holding you close
Makes the hurt disappear

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Old 08-16-2012, 08:52 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Default All of the time

Your like a toddler
full of drama
with her momma

Im like a scholar
with a collar
at a parlor

Twenty dollars
make you holler
and you want more

Like the ho
by the door
of the crack store

I'm the man
And now
you know

So tell me
how low
That you can go

On the bed
On the desk
The motel floor

Then nuts
Will be bust
that's for sure

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Female voice (Island)

I want your body, baby
I want your mind
I want to make you my babe
All of the time
I like your style
The way you rhyme
Your songs play in my head
All of the time
do what you want
Cause your so fine
I want you on that booty
All of the time

And the way that you kiss
And the touch of your lips
And the feel
of your finger tips
As they rest
on my hips (hips/hips/hips/hips)

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That girl
Get down
in a new car

For sure
Back room
at the town bar

Need a cure
For his unpure
daughter

Having sex
by the water
when he caught her

A better
Father
Woulda taught her

She's worth
More
Than a quarter

But now
To many
Have bought her

No more
Innocent
Daughter

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I want your body, baby
I want your mind
I want to make you my babe
All of time
I like your style
The way you rhyme
Your songs play in my head
All of the time
Do what you want
Cause your so fine
I want you on that booty
All of the time

And the way that you kiss
And the touch of your lips
And the feel
of your finger tips
As they rest
on my hips (hips/hips/hips/hips)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Rock star
Going to rock,
going to roll her

Make her crack
Mind attack,
bipolar

Sex star
At the bar
Going to show ya

Like a porn star
With your legs
on my shoulders

I'm the man
With the plan
Casanova

Not a wimp
Just a pimp
I'm a soldier

Don't hate
It's much to late
To try and mold her

She's getting older
And you know
I got scold her

But
I've already
told her

Her pimp
already
sold her

head's hard
just like
a boulder

Nobody
can
control her

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Old 08-16-2012, 08:54 PM   #23 (permalink)
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Default Sexy-n-affect

Lordy, Lordy
look at shorty
Getting naughty
at the party
I wish somebody
would have warned me
Chicks get horny
after forty

Then she started
To get retarded
I retreated
I got cornered
Next she grab me
And she kissed
Said that all her life
She's missed me

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What do you expect
When you got sexy in affect
Let's get a room, but not to rest
Let's have sex at the express

I've heard that you're the best
And from your looks, you pass the test
You put all them boy's to rest
Cause you got sexy in affect

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Let's go up to the room
I'll get all up in that womb
This bed might be my tomb
This girl might spell my doom
I'll make you feel at home
With the position you'll assume
Yeah, you'll be coming soon
Girl, I take you to the moon

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What do you expect
When you got sexy in affect
Let's get a room, but not to rest
Let's have sex at the express

I've heard that your the best
And from your looks you pass the test
You put all them boy's to rest
Cause you got sexy in affect

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Now I'm finished
I roll over
She thinks she got
The cold shoulder
guess I'm not like
your friends told you
disrespected
I won't hold her

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

What do you expect
When you got sexy in affect
Let's get a room, but not to rest
Let's have sex at the express

I've heard that your the best
And from your looks you pass the test
You put all them boy's to rest
Cause you got sexy in affect

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Old 08-16-2012, 08:55 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Talking Dance with the devil

You know I'm a rebel
But I'm getting old
I've danced with the devil
And he stole my soul
I'll need a shovel
To dig out of this hole
Cause the hand of the devil
Has taken a hold

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I've dance with the devil
Now I'm taking the lead
I'm ready to rumble
And take back what I need
Roll up my sleeves
And fight for my soul
Cause this dance with the devil
Is taking its toll

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I was a leader
But I've lost control
This heart was loving
But it's getting cold
So it's time to listen
And do as I'm told
Cause the hand of the devil
Has taken a hold

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I've danced with the devil
Now I'm taking the lead
I'm ready to rumble
And take back what I need
Roll up my sleeves
And fight for my soul
Cause this dance with the devil
Is taking its toll

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm not a angel
But I'll play the role
My faith and my morales
Are among what I've sold
this time I'm all in
No, I'm not going to fold
Cause the hand of the devil
Has taken a hold

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I've danced with the devil
Now I'm taking the lead
I'm ready to rumble
And take back what I need
Roll up my sleeves
And fight for my soul
Cause this dance with the devil
Is taking its toll

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Old 08-16-2012, 08:57 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Default Bushwhacker

Bushwhacker, I got a pretty sack
Shaved down, to my ass crack
Smooth and silky, pubes are whack
Clean and bald, from the front to the back

Nutcracker, I got some handsome nut's
Shaved up, just like my butt
Bushwhacked, say what
Sharp razor's, deep cut's

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(music and singing similar to The Eagles HOTEL CALIFORNIA-ladies voice)

No more trees in your forest
There's no fur on your bear
Bush whacking your body
Shaving all your hair
I want my tongue to flow smoothly
When I venture there
Bush whacking your body
and leaving you bare

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bushwhacker, I got a pretty sack
Shaved down, to my ass crack
Smooth and silky, pubes are whack
Clean and bald, just hair I lack

Backstabber, don't stab my back
Watch the razor, around my nut sack
Super freaky, you know i like that
shaved up from the front to the back

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

No more trees in your forest
There's no fur on your bear
Bush whacking your body
Shaving all your hair
I want my tongue to flow smoothly
When I venture there
Bush whacking your body
And leaving you bare

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lip smacker, I hear your lips smack
When you suck on my nut sack
Feels good, from front to back
Rub that tongue, from nut sack to ass crack

Big packer, you know what I pack
Big package, intact
Long and bald, smooth and fat
Now my doggy
Resembles your bald cat

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Old 08-16-2012, 09:27 PM   #26 (permalink)
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All up on that trampster
Like a wheel and a hamster
Bout to bam, bout to ram her
Bout to slam her, like a hammer

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Bout to nail her, like a nail
Going screw her, like a screw
Bout to put her in her place
Cause you know how I do

Bout to bolt her to the wall
Make her black and blue
Bout to fix that ass
With everyone of my tools

Bout to chain her to the bench
Going to lock her with a lock
Use every tool
In my toolbox

Bring wood to the woods
Bout to hunt that fox
Use every tool
In my toolbox

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tightening that grip
Just like a wrench
Bout to measure with that tape
Use every inch
You saw what you saw
Up in my tool chest
you saw a lot of tools
But my tools the best

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Bout to nail her, like a nail
Going to screw her, like a screw
Bout to put her in her place
Cause you know how I do

Bout to bolt her to the wall
Make her black and blue
Bout to fix that ass
With everyone of my tools

Bout to chain her to bench
Going lock her with a lock
Use every tool
In my toolbox

Bring wood to woods
Bout to hunt that fox
Use every tool
In my toolbox

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bout to nail her, like a nail
Going to screw her like a screw
Bout to put her in place
Cause you know how I do

Bout to bolt her to wall
Make her black and blue
Repair that ass
With everyone of my tools

Bout to chain her to the bench
Bout to lock her, with the lock
Use every tool
In my toolbox

Bring wood to the woods
Bout to hunt that fox
Use every tool
In my toolbox

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Old 08-18-2012, 02:45 AM   #27 (permalink)
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you have some real talent, keep up the good work
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Old 08-18-2012, 07:42 AM   #28 (permalink)
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you have some real talent, keep up the good work
Thanks a lot, sometimes I take all the views with no response as a negative thing. Positive feedback really helps
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Old 08-18-2012, 09:37 PM   #29 (permalink)
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Default 252 Life

Boulevard of broken dreams
Locked behind these bars
I hear the sound of screams
Prison life's so hard
I hear the door shut
As I fall further down
I'm stuck in this rut
And I'm securely bound

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Too many men have tried
Anything to survive
Too many men have died
25 to life

I'm locked up in this cell
Everyday and every night
Need to escape this hell
25 to life

My future is in doubt
My life is filled with strife
Why did I choose this route
25 to life

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Three strikes and your out
Three strikes and I'm in
My future is in doubt
And my future's Grimm
Where did I go wrong
Why did I sin
My life is over
Time for it to end

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Too many men have tried
Anything to survive
Too many men have died
25 to life

I'm locked up in this cell
Everyday and every night
Need to escape this hell
25 to life

My future is in doubt
My life is filled with strife
Why did I choose this route
25 to life

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All i want is freedom
I don't want to live
what kind of life is this
Nothing more to give
I can not trust a soul
No one is my friend
Here I wait all alone
Hoping for the end

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Too many man have tried
Anything to survive
Too many man have died
25 to life

I'm locked up in this cell
Everyday and every night
Need to escape this hell
25 to life

My future is in doubt
My life is filled with strife
Why did I choose this route
25 to life

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Old 08-18-2012, 09:39 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Default How lucky you are

Put your ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say goodbye to the stranger
And get back in the car
These feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just don't know
How lucky you are

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm not a scholar
No, I don't always win
But I'm not stupid
You'll see in the end
You let him kiss you
While I was at home
Baby, I missed you
And felt all alone

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Put you ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say good bye to the stranger
And get back in the car
these feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just don't know
How lucky you are

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I don't have a million dollars
I can't buy you diamond rings
But baby, I love you
And that's why I sing
I know that it seems like
it's not a big thing
But baby I feel Like
My hearts in a sling

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Put your ring on your finger
Get your ass out the bar
Say goodbye to the stranger
And get back in the car
these feelings can linger
Sometimes way to far
You just don't know
How lucky you are

Girl, you just know
How lucky you are
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