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Old 07-01-2012, 01:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default First lyrics to post, critque plz!

All the songs i write are uaually for a post-hardcore format ...sooo yea!


* * * * * * * * * "What I Fear Most"* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
All these lies have forsaken me.
I stand alone in the dark, locked away from the world,
this anger tears me from the inside out
and i remain crippled in tears.
Agony shreds my heart to pieces and all i can do is scream.
These emotions are so overwhelming.

(Chorus)
Please forgive me for what I've done to you,
what ive said to you,
how ive lied to you.
Ive become what i fear most.
A monster who hurts the one he loves.

* *(Breakdown/Interlude) Disappointment fills the hearts of my beloved.
These emotions have corrupted me and turned into what i fear the most.

* *I don't know what was going on in my head,
i was blinded by the fog of insanity,
and only forgiveness will lead me away.*

(Chorus)
Please forgive me for what ive done to you,
what ive said to you,
how ive lied to you.
Ive become what i fear most.
A monster who hurts the one he loves.
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