Feedback for my music, please.

blastingas10 · 07-25-2012, 09:02 PM

Thanks, jans. I know what youre saying about the transition, that's the biggest problem I've had. I tried to connect it with the descending chords and then the ascending walking bassline but I guess it's not working too well. I'm stumped.

~~1moretroubadour~~ · 07-25-2012, 09:23 PM

Hi!

Great work! It really reminds of the intro scene in Kill Bill 2 and I mean that as a compliment!

If you don't mind a little feedback, try adding layers to the background pads/strings and a bit of texture (guitarclouds if you can manage them). Something to really set an atmosphere because it sounds like this could be something with a lot of depth and the guitar melody can just kind of drip off this 'old record' sound you got going.

I like it a lot!

blastingas10 · 07-26-2012, 05:58 PM

Thanks a lot, troubadour.

blastingas10 · 09-02-2012, 10:19 PM

Finally was able to upload this song. Looking for some feedback, please. I know this thread has been inactive but hopefully someone will give this a listen.

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vUqMPHztR00

Bloozcrooz · 10-18-2012, 07:16 PM

Im a fan dude keep on posting!!! Sounds really fluent and effortless, wish my stuff sounded as good as yours. Great job man!!!

blastingas10 · 10-18-2012, 08:55 PM

Thanks a lot, blooz. It's probably my favorite piece I've ever done. Fairly simple song. Onl four chords. Not even sure what scale I'm using, think its the natural minor with a little bit of improv.

Plankton · 10-19-2012, 09:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blastingas10

Finally was able to upload this song. Looking for some feedback, please. I know this thread has been inactive but hopefully someone will give this a listen.

YouTube - My Song 3

Couldn't get it to work Blast. My computer is acting up tho, so it may just be something on my end. Will fix and try again... after I get this job out the door.

Edit: After posting, the vid popped into the quote box, so listening now...

Nice and mellow. Some good soloing. Pretty good tune.

blastingas10 · 10-19-2012, 11:10 AM

Thanks a lot, plank.

09-02-2012, 10:19 PM	#34 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Finally was able to upload this song. Looking for some feedback, please. I know this thread has been inactive but hopefully someone will give this a listen. http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vUqMPHztR00 Last edited by blastingas10; 09-11-2012 at 11:50 AM.

07-25-2012, 09:02 PM	#31 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Thanks, jans. I know what youre saying about the transition, that's the biggest problem I've had. I tried to connect it with the descending chords and then the ascending walking bassline but I guess it's not working too well. I'm stumped.

07-25-2012, 09:23 PM	#32 (permalink)
~~1moretroubadour~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 43	Hi! Great work! It really reminds of the intro scene in Kill Bill 2 and I mean that as a compliment! If you don't mind a little feedback, try adding layers to the background pads/strings and a bit of texture (guitarclouds if you can manage them). Something to really set an atmosphere because it sounds like this could be something with a lot of depth and the guitar melody can just kind of drip off this 'old record' sound you got going. I like it a lot!

07-26-2012, 05:58 PM	#33 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Thanks a lot, troubadour.

10-18-2012, 08:55 PM	#36 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Thanks a lot, blooz. It's probably my favorite piece I've ever done. Fairly simple song. Onl four chords. Not even sure what scale I'm using, think its the natural minor with a little bit of improv.

10-19-2012, 11:10 AM	#38 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Thanks a lot, plank.