Feedback for my music, please.

blastingas10 · 06-06-2012, 04:44 PM

It's definitely simple. I'm not trying to blow anyone away with complexity. I just started messing around and I liked the feel of it. This is one of my first songs, so, not bad for a beginner?

Here's another one, or actually the only other one I've written. What you guys think?

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MPsfQ1yzIUk

Blarobbarg · 06-07-2012, 12:10 AM

Wow. I like this one better than the first, definitely. Great feel to it, and feels more like a real song. Enjoy the country/blues feel it's got. Good work!

blastingas10 · 06-07-2012, 05:36 AM

It's definitely more complete. I've been working on the guitar solo but I really need my interface before I can get something sounding good for it

blastingas10 · 06-12-2012, 11:45 PM

Something else I've been working on.

Feedback, please.

YouTube - My Song 3

Plankton · 06-13-2012, 12:15 PM

Nice tone. I know you're still at it but it needs an ending.

blastingas10 · 06-13-2012, 12:42 PM

It definely needs a lot of work. Thats a weak mix. I need to get my interface, badly. Does the rhythm come in to soon? I was going for a fast transisition but I'm not sure if I like the way that sounds. But like I said, it's a very rough mix. I tried to add more chords thought the first part, but it was hard to get anything that sounded good.

blastingas10 · 06-15-2012, 06:37 PM

Huh?

MichaelForbes · 06-19-2012, 09:51 AM

You're onto something...I'm just not sure what. But it was intriguing enough to keep me listening.

Maybe a key change, middle eight...something to change direction a bit. But KEEP ON IT.

Michael

blastingas10 · 06-19-2012, 11:51 AM

Well honestly, I don't know what I'm onto either. As I mentioned, I'm a beginner at songwriting. I've been practicing for a while, learning other people's music. I'm pretty good at that, but lately I've been trying to write my own music. So be easy on me, I'm new to it. But I thank you for the encouragement. Which piece were you referring to? Both?

blastingas10 · 06-20-2012, 10:14 PM

Here's a more complete version of my "spanish stair" song. Let me know what you think

YouTube - Spanish stair

06-06-2012, 04:44 PM	#11 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	It's definitely simple. I'm not trying to blow anyone away with complexity. I just started messing around and I liked the feel of it. This is one of my first songs, so, not bad for a beginner? Here's another one, or actually the only other one I've written. What you guys think? http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MPsfQ1yzIUk Last edited by blastingas10; 06-06-2012 at 09:34 PM.

06-07-2012, 12:10 AM	#12 (permalink)
Blarobbarg Do good. Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Minneapolis, Minnesota Posts: 2,065	Wow. I like this one better than the first, definitely. Great feel to it, and feels more like a real song. Enjoy the country/blues feel it's got. Good work! __________________ https://rateyourmusic.com/~Blarobbarg ｡･::･ﾟ★,｡･::･ﾟ☆　^my RYM^　｡･::･ﾟ★,｡･::･ﾟ☆ (◠‿◠✿)

06-13-2012, 12:15 PM	#15 (permalink)
Plankton Just Keep Swimming... Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: See signature... Posts: 7,765	Nice tone. I know you're still at it but it needs an ending. __________________ See location...

06-07-2012, 05:36 AM	#13 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	It's definitely more complete. I've been working on the guitar solo but I really need my interface before I can get something sounding good for it

06-12-2012, 11:45 PM	#14 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Something else I've been working on. Feedback, please. YouTube - My Song 3

06-13-2012, 12:42 PM	#16 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	It definely needs a lot of work. Thats a weak mix. I need to get my interface, badly. Does the rhythm come in to soon? I was going for a fast transisition but I'm not sure if I like the way that sounds. But like I said, it's a very rough mix. I tried to add more chords thought the first part, but it was hard to get anything that sounded good.

06-15-2012, 06:37 PM	#17 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Huh?

06-19-2012, 09:51 AM	#18 (permalink)
MichaelForbes Groupie Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: New Jersey Posts: 24	You're onto something...I'm just not sure what. But it was intriguing enough to keep me listening. Maybe a key change, middle eight...something to change direction a bit. But KEEP ON IT. Michael

06-19-2012, 11:51 AM	#19 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Well honestly, I don't know what I'm onto either. As I mentioned, I'm a beginner at songwriting. I've been practicing for a while, learning other people's music. I'm pretty good at that, but lately I've been trying to write my own music. So be easy on me, I'm new to it. But I thank you for the encouragement. Which piece were you referring to? Both?

06-20-2012, 10:14 PM	#20 (permalink)
blastingas10 Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,126	Here's a more complete version of my "spanish stair" song. Let me know what you think YouTube - Spanish stair