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Old 06-11-2012, 09:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Awesome! I love how the mood of the lyrics matches the mood and rhythm of the melody and instrumentals. Only thing I would say is that you might want to cut out "damn," just because it might throw some people off and mess up their impression of an otherwise amazing song. Don't want to get docked for one word, you know. Great work, keep it up!
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