Lyrical criticism needed.

NewSlang · 05-15-2012, 09:55 PM

I am looking for input on this current song I am working on. I am going into the studio to record this track in late June. I need this to be right, because I have some people with good influence taking a listen. If you see any glaring omissions, feel free to let me know.

I am not looking for production advice....i realize this is a basement recording, and that some of the harmonies and mix is incorrect....hence going into the studio, lol.

Thanks for listening.
youtube.com/watch?v=JQoohtqGXWw
Brian

05-15-2012, 09:55 PM	#1 (permalink)
NewSlang Groupie Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 2	Lyrical criticism needed. I am looking for input on this current song I am working on. I am going into the studio to record this track in late June. I need this to be right, because I have some people with good influence taking a listen. If you see any glaring omissions, feel free to let me know. I am not looking for production advice....i realize this is a basement recording, and that some of the harmonies and mix is incorrect....hence going into the studio, lol. Thanks for listening. youtube.com/watch?v=JQoohtqGXWw Brian Last edited by NewSlang; 05-15-2012 at 10:02 PM.