poem/song (lyrics, Kiss, French, memory, songs)

riseagainstrocks · 05-06-2005, 08:38 PM

this is spoken in a style similar to mewithoutYou over acoustic guitar

Remorse

Gaunt the name of my tired horse
Trudging into the sun head hung with remorse

It’s all my fault, those words I spat. Those curses, I’d say behind your back. Behind your wings.

I only want to preach to my own swollen heart, removing cancer requires for me to stop breathing. Keep the resuscitator hidden, I deserve this one.

And I believe that love is only privy to the blind, the deaf, the dumb. Take mine eyes. I’ll pray not to see. I’ve dirtied you with stolen glances. My memory recalls the happier times.

Die my pride. Die my heart.

I feel like Hector. I set my own city to ruin. And all because I couldn’t tame my judgment.

White lace adornments. Fixed space adornments. You hold a place in my heart. So magnificent. So revered. Now.

tu sei bella l’amore
you are beautiful my love
mi dispiace
i am sorry

all languages carry my regrets.

I AM TO BLAME

I’ll seal this with a kiss. I can only pray I will see you once more

Purged of feeling stands my conscience.
How horrific is the lack of emotion, empathy, empowerment…

Kill me with a smile
And stand so close
I can’t breathe

I wish to brim with this love. To expel negativity
Wait for tomorrow
a new day

staining black the pages. I’ve misplaced my heart again.
Throw me a rope. If even that
Throw me a life. If even that

I’ve abstained too long. I no longer want to be a man filled with pride, with hate, or remorse

Trauma · 05-06-2005, 09:59 PM

Damn, very nice. I can imagination that spoken.
Kind of reminds me of Morrison.
I love the Italian.

.angie. · 05-06-2005, 10:18 PM

holy hell, eveyone that has posted songs/poems in here is very good. it amazes me that people can come up with all that.

IamAlejo · 05-06-2005, 11:24 PM

The Italian intertwined is defenitely catchy.

I've liked basically all the lyrics/poems you've posted so far, but this is a favorite.

riseagainstrocks · 05-06-2005, 11:27 PM

dude, the ladies love italian haha. it helps that i'm taking both an online course and the class through school. there are some phrases that melt them...ah yes...

IamAlejo · 05-07-2005, 09:12 AM

At first I was thinking it was French for some odd reason...and I was thinking "What a B itch"

Then I figured out it was Italian...and I really liked it. That whole poem is good though.

05-06-2005, 08:38 PM	#1 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	poem/song this is spoken in a style similar to mewithoutYou over acoustic guitar Remorse Gaunt the name of my tired horse Trudging into the sun head hung with remorse It’s all my fault, those words I spat. Those curses, I’d say behind your back. Behind your wings. I only want to preach to my own swollen heart, removing cancer requires for me to stop breathing. Keep the resuscitator hidden, I deserve this one. And I believe that love is only privy to the blind, the deaf, the dumb. Take mine eyes. I’ll pray not to see. I’ve dirtied you with stolen glances. My memory recalls the happier times. Die my pride. Die my heart. I feel like Hector. I set my own city to ruin. And all because I couldn’t tame my judgment. White lace adornments. Fixed space adornments. You hold a place in my heart. So magnificent. So revered. Now. tu sei bella l’amore you are beautiful my love mi dispiace i am sorry all languages carry my regrets. I AM TO BLAME I’ll seal this with a kiss. I can only pray I will see you once more Purged of feeling stands my conscience. How horrific is the lack of emotion, empathy, empowerment… Kill me with a smile And stand so close I can’t breathe I wish to brim with this love. To expel negativity Wait for tomorrow a new day staining black the pages. I’ve misplaced my heart again. Throw me a rope. If even that Throw me a life. If even that I’ve abstained too long. I no longer want to be a man filled with pride, with hate, or remorse __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

05-06-2005, 09:59 PM	#2 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Damn, very nice. I can imagination that spoken. Kind of reminds me of Morrison. I love the Italian. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

05-06-2005, 10:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
.angie. contrast&compare. Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 661	holy hell, eveyone that has posted songs/poems in here is very good. it amazes me that people can come up with all that. __________________ Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?

05-06-2005, 11:24 PM	#4 (permalink)
IamAlejo Muck Fusic Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Virginia Beach Posts: 1,575	The Italian intertwined is defenitely catchy. I've liked basically all the lyrics/poems you've posted so far, but this is a favorite. __________________ a man, a plan, a canal, panama

05-06-2005, 11:27 PM	#5 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	dude, the ladies love italian haha. it helps that i'm taking both an online course and the class through school. there are some phrases that melt them...ah yes... __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

05-07-2005, 09:12 AM	#6 (permalink)
IamAlejo Muck Fusic Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Virginia Beach Posts: 1,575	At first I was thinking it was French for some odd reason...and I was thinking "What a B itch" Then I figured out it was Italian...and I really liked it. That whole poem is good though. __________________ a man, a plan, a canal, panama