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Old 05-05-2005, 08:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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you are the reason i am dieing inside your tearing me open letting all hell out. you make me crazy you make me feel like dieing i need to kill the pain inside. i need to break free from your leash. let me live let me be i need to live leave me the fuuck alone if you continue to torment me i will let all hell free fuuck you you little bitch you need to stay away if i catch you around me i will kill kill destroy destroy deestroy.






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Old 05-05-2005, 03:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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stop labeling things hardcore cause they have to do with dying. or killing


not good. at all. sorry.


post 1000! sweet
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Old 05-05-2005, 03:46 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm not too crazy about these ones....it just seems too much like a rap song with that "**** you you little bitch"
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Old 05-05-2005, 08:41 PM   #4 (permalink)
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the first couple lines are pretty good. but that little bitch thing is.. interesting.
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Old 05-06-2005, 02:33 AM   #5 (permalink)
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yeah interesting in a very interesting way if you know what i mean...
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Old 05-06-2005, 11:40 AM   #6 (permalink)
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needs work if you want to be hardcore you've got to spill your soul.
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Old 05-13-2005, 08:37 AM   #7 (permalink)
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as i lay here waiting for my death i take in my last breath i lay awaiting the sweet caress of death i utter my last words i speak my last sentence"come retreave me from this hell of a life take me away to a new place.
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Old 05-22-2005, 06:22 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 05-22-2005, 10:25 AM   #9 (permalink)
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harsh...but fair...
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Old 05-28-2005, 05:54 PM   #10 (permalink)
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meh, not amazing...
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