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punk-4-life 05-05-2005 07:53 AM

my hardcore lyrics
 
you are the reason i am dieing inside your tearing me open letting all hell out. you make me crazy you make me feel like dieing i need to kill the pain inside. i need to break free from your leash. let me live let me be i need to live leave me the fuuck alone if you continue to torment me i will let all hell free fuuck you you little bitch you need to stay away if i catch you around me i will kill kill destroy destroy deestroy.






let me know what you think

riseagainstrocks 05-05-2005 02:23 PM

stop labeling things hardcore cause they have to do with dying. or killing


not good. at all. sorry.


post 1000! sweet

IamAlejo 05-05-2005 02:46 PM

I'm not too crazy about these ones....it just seems too much like a rap song with that "**** you you little bitch"

.angie. 05-05-2005 07:41 PM

the first couple lines are pretty good.:) but that little bitch thing is.. interesting.

blackTshirt 05-06-2005 01:33 AM

yeah interesting in a very interesting way if you know what i mean...

IMATOOL 05-06-2005 10:40 AM

needs work if you want to be hardcore you've got to spill your soul.

punk-4-life 05-13-2005 07:37 AM

as i lay here waiting for my death i take in my last breath i lay awaiting the sweet caress of death i utter my last words i speak my last sentence"come retreave me from this hell of a life take me away to a new place.

dog 05-22-2005 05:22 AM

^poo

AprilMay 05-22-2005 09:25 AM

harsh...but fair...

Imonlydancing 05-28-2005 04:54 PM

meh, not amazing...


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