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Old 12-11-2011, 11:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
Get in ma belly
 
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Originally Posted by Odyshape View Post
who the hell am I
and the where the hell am I going

I just want to remember what
I saw first
but against all my efforts
the slivers only begin to pile
This is actually very good.

That was adorable.
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