USCBVic

Ok, so I'm new to this site, so please bear with me. I'm usually pretty reserved with the things I write, but I've been recently persuaded to break down that barrier. With that being said, these are some lyrics that I wrote during class yesterday (probably not the best time to write, I know). Please feel free to comment or message me with any suggestions or criticisms. Thanks for reading :-)

Jay's Song

You can't tell me it's over 'n your feelings have gone away
'cause I know without a doubt
that I'm the only girl to make you feel this way,
the one you'd write a song about

'N now it's my turn to write a song about you
and all those crazy things you do
that drive me head over heels
and I've fallen, I'm down in it waist deep
and there's no way that I can keep, I can't keep my mind off of you

You still have the necklace I gave you before I left
and I have your songs and clothes
Why are we both denying what we should accept?
'Cause it's just how the story goes

'N now it's my turn to write a song about you
and all those crazy things you do
that drive me head over heels
and I've fallen, I'm down in it waist deep
and there's no way that I can keep, I can't keep my mind off of you

I've put myself out there, I can't let you go
There's one more thing, baby, that you should know

Here's to you, love, here's a song about you
and just how much I love you
oh, you drive me head over heels
and I've fallen, I'm down in it waist deep
and there's no way that I can keep, I can't keep my mind off of you.