Unfinished song , but is what i have good?

Taylorpaige1346 · 08-31-2011, 12:50 PM

What i have written has meaning behind it . So it may not make sense to those reading it but please be honest on what you think . -

You were sitting in the street .
Caught my eyes by your looks ,
My heart by the words that you speak .
You are the music to my heart ,
And if you ever left ,
I'd be torn apart.
My dreams are now my nightmares ,
But that's okay .
Because my dream has came true ,
And if you were wondering that dream is you .
I am true to you as the sky is blue ,
And I will always know i can say the same for you.

Thats all I have so far but what do you think ?

08-31-2011, 12:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
Taylorpaige1346 Groupie Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 3	Unfinished song , but is what i have good? What i have written has meaning behind it . So it may not make sense to those reading it but please be honest on what you think . - You were sitting in the street . Caught my eyes by your looks , My heart by the words that you speak . You are the music to my heart , And if you ever left , I'd be torn apart. My dreams are now my nightmares , But that's okay . Because my dream has came true , And if you were wondering that dream is you . I am true to you as the sky is blue , And I will always know i can say the same for you. Thats all I have so far but what do you think ?