Camerjoe

worlds spinnin fast im just trying to relax and take a nap,
havent slept in awhile to hard when your trying to roam a world known to hate,
make no mistake we all get through one foot at a time, no matter what greed controls all minds,
todays socitiets dont mean to much to me, apocalypse is no sudden rush to see,

a doctors note to escape the pain that insists to live while i cease to exist,
to many minds i feel every line i take, like it was the last breath at stake,
friends and friends never enough i mean no sympathy or apololgy, you need no psycology,
to know that my basic biology ruins my own life, i feel no desires or temptations to procced,
insteand the knife, i bend the rules of existence with a mind set in the distance,

a man came home one day, told his family he would recieve no pay,
life went down, suddenly the ground came close to see, rock bottom in reality,
no hope, no desire left just tiresom trys to take a new path without a crash,
tears fill his eyes as his soul in the air and his body lies still,
with no ability to stay until help arrives, here comes another suicide like a genocide,

hater hate, discrimante patter will not eliminate the fate of this world,
im considering the possiblity of us having the ability to subside the anger,
to create as whole new air to breathe, to seath the everlasting grudges,
living in the hearts of our new order judges,

masks and masks to hide your digninty from the pain it will recieve,
as the blood seeps through your teeth, a ecosystem with no ventilation,
no room to gasp, finally finished the race, again i came last,
first place is never overrated until the race becomes fast,
independence is no happiness to me, care free is further then last week,
break a bottle or two, just to prove no point, todays world order,
is anarchy in the worst form, itll be a happy day when the world mourns,

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Atrocious

Several badass lines and rhymes in there bro, but ya need to "balance the bars" so to speak. Even the lines up where it kinda puntuates itself with the rhyme, ya know what I mean?

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Talking much about oneself can also be a means to conceal oneself.-Friedrich Nietzsche

Now hatred is by far the longest pleasure; men love in haste but they detest at leisure.-Lord Byron

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