Song I made not sure whether to leave it instrumental or add lyrics

~~Odyshape~~ · 07-29-2011, 09:35 PM

I made this song trying to make some thing (post punkish?). Can't decide whether or not to add lyrics to it though. I have heard it too many times though to really tell what it needs at this point so I thought I would let you guys hear it instead.

**Janszoon** · 07-29-2011, 09:42 PM

Sounds great man! Very moody. I vote for adding vocals, I think it would sound really good with some low VU-ish type vocals.

~~Odyshape~~ · 07-29-2011, 10:10 PM

Thanks! hmm I will upload what the results are that's a really good idea. I have some other stuff on my channel if you would like to critique it pm me if you would like. I have only recently been playing guitar and have been recording only for a very limited amount of time so pointers would be very very useful.

07-29-2011, 09:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
~~Odyshape~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 526	Song I made not sure whether to leave it instrumental or add lyrics I made this song trying to make some thing (post punkish?). Can't decide whether or not to add lyrics to it though. I have heard it too many times though to really tell what it needs at this point so I thought I would let you guys hear it instead.

07-29-2011, 09:42 PM	#2 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	Sounds great man! Very moody. I vote for adding vocals, I think it would sound really good with some low VU-ish type vocals. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

07-29-2011, 10:10 PM	#3 (permalink)
~~Odyshape~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 526	Thanks! hmm I will upload what the results are that's a really good idea. I have some other stuff on my channel if you would like to critique it pm me if you would like. I have only recently been playing guitar and have been recording only for a very limited amount of time so pointers would be very very useful.