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Old 12-04-2012, 09:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Writing paragraphs of asinine rhymes with no sense of time
Horrorcore is for children, go ahead and ask RL Stine
His kid's books are still scarier than anything you could write
In fact I'll read your rhymes to kids to help them go to sleep at night
You too busy painting your face trying to look all scary
Real talk homie, you look like a fairy
And my girlfriend wouldn't **** with you, she afraid of clowns
Semi violent rapping is played out, time to find a new sound
I go HAM on these forums, call me porky pig
I ain't ever gunna stop this, take a look at my ****ing sig

This **** is amazing doo
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Old 02-01-2012, 04:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Oh look this soft as a duvet rapper claimin' he in the building
He reminds me of Paris Hilton, minus the millions
I'll rip your jugular out, chop you into pieces
Serve you on a dinner plate, Goddamn deleecious
Oops, I mean delicious, My style sid vicious
I'm going Based God on you I'll show you who the bitch is
I'm colder than a blizzard in the north pole
My soul is blacker than a chunk of charcoal
Having a vocabulary doesn't make you educated
Slinging big words to sound smart is highly overrated
It's better to show restraint than to lose control
We'll have a talk about it by the bong over a bowl
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Old 02-01-2012, 05:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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He reminds me of Paris Hilton, minus the millions
That was a good line

Don't bull**** me boy I ain't a battle rapper. I'm a sneak in while it's dark schadenphrenic neck snapper! Chillin in the bushes next to ya gate
been here four hours, lying in wait. Brought my Estwing -we gonna clean the slate.
All you do is playa hate, I circumnavigate such a state of mind. Stay on my grind. Got my Juggalos runnin behind me, the most hated fans-one of a kind we can never be stopped.
Never see a hatchet dropped, wicked **** can't be stopped-not even topped. Risk it get ya melon popped
like I was Gallagher! ****in' epic like Latimer, serve ya like a customer.
Huslte fire like Promethius ya bustle dire and beneath this. "My style sid vicious," ****in' kid wishes. (Ya momma's callin you for dishes.)
My style is versatile, you're style is **** pile. My words so evil I'm spittin black bile, yours are so ****ty they're ****in fertile!
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Old 02-01-2012, 05:43 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'll play you a symphony of destruction till its reigning blood onto my skin
Got the coroner searching for your next of kin
I'm an undead monster from tutankhamun's tomb
I'll have you running scared trying to climb back in your mother's womb
****ing with me is like flying too close to the sun
Tear your wings off watching you bleed and scream just for fun
My goons ready to start a violence revolution and clap all of you clowns
You think you hot but you rhyme like and 11 year old girl with downs
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Old 02-01-2012, 06:20 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Far out like Andromeda I'm a lyrical phenomena a vocal automaton droppin bombs on the forum. Bitches dig it when I do it for 'em. I'm genius like Daedalus, you folly like Icarus.
You're udead but I'm undying-something ya rap should be trying. Your raps are pollution and mine the solution, I wrap it up like absolution. While you still toot-tootin ya own lil horn, ****in thing ain't grown since the day you were born.
I got more lines than New York got gang signs, open ya mouth-I'm about to blow ya minds! That dude's unrelenting of blowin ****in guys!
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Old 02-02-2012, 12:51 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The only hatchet you've ever touched is the one on your chain
You think you tough cuz like listen to psychopathic records? You're not insane
Your rhymes are inane require no brain
I know 20 other rappers who's style is the same
A kid from the suburbs who wants to look cool
I'm the reason you should have stayed in school
You rap like a dropout, Don't give me no copouts
You paint your face while I rock out with my cock out
My words hold the strength of hercules in his prime
My bars alone could smash the ground and make your mother cry
There just ain't no escaping it
Unrelenting in this thread and he raping it
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Old 02-02-2012, 03:22 PM   #7 (permalink)
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You ain't got what it takes to be a rapper dude, your lines are too short, too crude.
Ya damn right I'm a dropout-three schools threw me out for teacher knockouts!
Think I should've stayed in school? Read your own verse you sound like a fool!
Don't worry, won't try to make ya momma cry-I wanna make the bitch die!
Nah I ain't tough cause I rep Psy, rock it because I'm rough-that's why.
I can do short lil clips like you if I want too, but nobody wants to sound like you,
You don't know what you're doin that's why you keep screwin up.
You'll keep tryin them comebacks, while I'm writing mad tracks.
The only tracks you got are on the arm. Them raps are cheesey like parm,
and them bars weak, couldn't do anybody harm. Ya **** is meek
unlike me, who's got mad bombs fallin free. Cannot **** with this mother****er Atrocious,
otherwise known as Blastphemist the Xist. Everybody listening comming up next it's Unrelenting with some more pretending.
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Old 11-10-2012, 07:23 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Yo it is the kray Canadian Asiatic Afrocentric
the 60 second assassin leave you *******s deaded
your cash flows rented
your rap flows ended
I'm dumb nice and you crack smoke endless
you get body slammed by Ted Dibiase
I'm a mix of 151 and pure sake
get bodied
by this ASAP Rocky
10th degree black belt karate
I'm like a Bugatti
A high class
fly mack
you dont want to try rap
against me
because I'm similar to a nine blast
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Old 02-02-2012, 03:58 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Your rhymes remind me of a man by the name of Shel Silverstein
Playa you aint mean, wearing makeup like a scene queen
Your warbled vocabulary is that of a retarded Mr Bean
Word around town you frequent gay bars with cut off jeans
That shouldn't be a surprise, I know that you're a fairy
You suck dick and swallow it, mixing meat with dairy
You made blog about shaving your ass "Don't want your man to think it's hairy"
Your boyfriend dresses you like a barbie doll and refers to you as mary
But here on the internet, you wanna look like you are crazy
Trying to amaze me, at best your couplets are hazy
Insulting my keystyling skills will never phase me
With a style so feminine, I'll rename you stacy.
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Old 02-02-2012, 04:23 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Hear ya talkin **** about Shel, but even he could give you hell.
Bugs me how your rhymes stutter, I told ya buy a dictionary butt nutter.
All you got is f*g s**t, must know alot about it or your tryin to hide behind it.
You've been reading my raps too much, bitin' my lines and such.
Keep on hatin', bull****tin and speculatin. I'll keep perpetuatin
An underground sound that could turn ya life around! Once I give ya wife a pound.
You need to back the f**k down, you messin with a clown that's been to your town.
I know what it's like: all ***gots and dikes. Lil kids on trikes that're cooler than you,
see me and run away-at least they know what to do. I've seen what ya got brew,
and there's nothin to it-hell Shia Lebouf could surely do it same as Unrelenting.
Mother****er condecending, but that's all you got, 'cept maybe some pot.
You can try again, but I'm know you'll never win. Hellish mother****er and my rap is like sin.
My soul under the control of a demon, your's like a c*nt hole chock full of semen.
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