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Horrible | 1 | 20.00% | |
Good | 1 | 20.00% | |
Ok | 2 | 40.00% | |
Dont try writing | 4 | 80.00% | |
Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-09-2011, 06:09 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: May 2011
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Please don't Go
Do you see me?
I gotta know that you are there I just want to reach out But it feels as though you dont care Why cant we just make a journey A space in time Where I am yours And you are mine Why does it hurt so bad To just want to feel my arms around you Lets just take this chance Cause baby this is killing me (x20 If your words are true Fight for it You cant let go Just cause things wont be easy If you truly care Take my hand And dont let go Lets just take this chance For i will never let you fall Dream as though these roads are never ending (x2) Baby please dont go Cause i know im gonna miss you like crazy If your words are true I think your gonna miss me too Baby why cant it just be you and me Just tell me why |
05-12-2011, 04:51 PM | #2 (permalink) |
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i would not have "don't try writing" as a poll answer, although the lyrics lack any real depth i would not ever tell you to not write i mean the fact that you wrote a song in itself can be considered impressive on some level all you need to do is hone your skill.
if you want to learn more about writing more in depth lyrics try looking up Iron & Wine, Bright Eyes, Bon Iver, Etc... (also i know other people may think these suggestions aren't great but they will get the job done) and don't just listen to the music read the lyrics. also don't be afraid to make the songs personal and what i mean is make the song yours make it so even if someone you know stole the song your friends would still be able to tell you wrote it. |
06-22-2011, 09:06 PM | #3 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Jun 2011
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Did you do the lyrics yourself, thats cool
Dark Side by Kelly Clarkson ( i love this) Here's a place that i know it's not pretty there and few have ever gone if i show it to you now will it make you run away or will you stay even if it hurts even if i try to push you out will you return? and remind me who i really am please remind me who i really am everybody's got a dark side do you love me? can you love mine? nobody's a picture perfect but we're worth it you know that we're worth it will you love me? even with my dark side? like a diamond from black dust it's hard to know it can become a few give up so don't give up on me please remind me who i really am everybody's got a dark side do you love me? can you love mine? nobody's a picture perfect but we're worth it you know that we're worth it will you love me? even with my dark side? don't run away don't run away just tell me that you will stay promise me you will stay don't run away don't run away just promise me you will stay promise me you will stay will you love me? ohh everybody's got a dark side do you love me? can you love mine? nobody's a picture perfect but we're worth it you know that we're worth it will you love me? even with my dark side?
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