EPICx2011

um first I'm only ten and I'm new here but here's my first sing written it's not finished yet so tell me what u think

Slowly

you took me in, you let me go
you taught me what I need to know.
You were my friend, you were the worst
but in the end you always fixed the hurt
when I was lost, I came to you
though you never quite got the clue
So why can't you see what's happening,
slowly ,I'm fallin over you
slowly, I don't know what to do
slowly, im starting to think that I wont get through
slowly ,I'm fallin over you
slowly ,I'm findin what to do
slowly, you're fallin for me too
now I don't know what to do
if you can't get a clue
then I can't be with or without you

written by,JASMINE TURNER[/COLOR][/FONT][/FONT][/I][/B]