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06-07-2011, 04:02 PM | #21 (permalink) |
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Random song I'm writing, and it's mostly happy. Enjoy!
So much love is breaken apart without a single tear tasting the heart so much cliche from love songs singing the same strofes this is not an exceptetion tho a different song visualize a life without pain no games to win and no women to gain what would the prizes mean for the effort put into when you can't win love because it aint a happy moment when we touch our feelings with a hand of salvation and a mind with no cealings waitresses with waiting angel wings winning you the love you deserve sometimes the ground is cold and the love is untold lets hope for the story to unfold sun rays of catterpie strings blowing in butterfly wings rainbows in making the rain is taking the cliche part of the song and its means because I play the same game without enough shame I don't know what those flags mean when I was young the smiles were enough tho the bombs destroyed my teens dig deeper dig steady it's a long way til we're ready what we've found is gold the story untold and the memories are bold resting beneath the scolding water wipes us off the floor like dust swimming in the chaos so clear whispering slowly how you should've told me to stay away from there |
06-08-2011, 04:11 PM | #22 (permalink) |
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The Moon / Bella Luna
the moon is a picture up on the blue painted wall hanging like a courtin above us all oh shining brighter than the sun and stars combined lightning up the sky the nightlight rewinds bella luna you are the mother and child gold and silver king and queen whispering the whisperers the messages oh bella luna good night i'll never live to see your dying day so let me please help you in some way I can't dance, I can't love let me feed your soul I'll dance on your dark side with sun stone soles I can play guitar and see through your mighty disguise crying inside and you want it out let me play you a song to sing my friend we can dance on jupiter and run saturns' rings lend me your peace and i'll give you my wings bella luna you are my maker and my teacher gold and silver king and queen whispering the whispers the messages oh bella luna sleep tight |
06-12-2011, 07:11 PM | #23 (permalink) |
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verse 1
every captain needs a sinking ship every living flame dies when oxygen forfeits every child was made by two peoples love melting two parts into one whole it's summer and warm you want the winter and cold when the winter arrives you miss the summer most you want day at night and the moon to shine as the morning sun you want tomorrows feast but talk about yesterdays run pre chorus this is so clever use of treasures gold instead of shoes cold instead of food chorus Opposite attracts add and subtract love times people makes a whole lot of mess gravity wont let me go people wont let me stay I hope there's a place in beetween but for now I wont complain |
06-16-2011, 01:55 AM | #24 (permalink) |
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D-A-Adimish-BM-(FM)-G-A-D
yellow sky and brilliant blue lights flying above us in a green air stripe blood streaming red as a cold persons cheeks blue hands and feet violet peace oh this pretty masquerade colours in different shades love is pouring down as rain your face is a painting oh i've been waiting to draw those lips so red flowers blooming blue and white your face is folding out the time those green brown eyes are such a fantastic sight I just might stear a little second longer before oh this pretty masquerade colours in so many different shades love is pouring down as rain as rain as rain not quite finished yet tho |
06-21-2011, 07:28 AM | #25 (permalink) |
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CAPO 6
This one is called "In Time" : ) verse 1 I can be your superman I can be your only hand the sun when it rains one that makes you sane and say that everything is going to be fine oh with the wind you outgrow the good when the trees whisper your name in time pre chorus save this song and buy yourself some time let the problems flow out of sight chorus make me safe lets try to run away in time hope the clouds will stay for a while so the closet light hides me away in time verse 2 treasure treasure you're holding me together let's try to keep it pleasure so we don't have to fall back our roof is falling breaking the installments guess it wasn't timeless our ship is off its' track pre chorus save this song and buy yourself some time let the problems flow out of sight chorus make me safe lets try to run away in time hope the clouds will stay for a while so the closet light hides me away in time bridge(?) with humble words we're crossing roads you enter mine and I enter yours surreal as it is the sun is setting across the sea chorusx2 |
06-25-2011, 07:32 AM | #26 (permalink) |
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This prohabition self decieving center we living in
can't ever tell our feelings practice taking cealings of seas within I would love to see the trees dance with flames and tame the powers we need if pigs can fly and water is hollow I'll join the war and seize the greed - something I'm writing on now, reviews of this and all other lyrics are highly appriciated! I love feedback : ) |
07-19-2011, 05:44 PM | #27 (permalink) |
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hey guys! I got a video up of me singing and playing my original song "Undefined", and I would love some feedback on both lyrics and music, thanks! : D
‪Undefined by ParadoxQeet - Original‬‏ - YouTube |
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