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Old 06-07-2011, 04:02 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Random song I'm writing, and it's mostly happy. Enjoy!



So much love is breaken apart
without a single tear tasting the heart
so much cliche from love songs
singing the same strofes
this is not an exceptetion tho a different song

visualize a life without pain
no games to win and no women to gain
what would the prizes mean for the effort put into
when you can't win love because it aint

a happy moment when we touch our feelings
with a hand of salvation and a mind with no cealings
waitresses with waiting angel wings winning you the love you deserve
sometimes the ground is cold and the love is untold
lets hope for the story to unfold

sun rays of catterpie strings
blowing in butterfly wings
rainbows in making the rain is taking
the cliche part of the song and its means

because I play the same game
without enough shame
I don't know what those flags mean

when I was young
the smiles were enough
tho the bombs destroyed my teens


dig deeper dig steady it's a long way til we're ready
what we've found is gold
the story untold and the memories are bold
resting beneath the scolding water

wipes us off
the floor like dust
swimming in the chaos so clear

whispering slowly
how you should've told me
to stay away from there
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Old 06-08-2011, 04:11 PM   #22 (permalink)
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The Moon / Bella Luna

the moon is a picture
up on the blue painted wall
hanging like a courtin
above us all

oh shining brighter than the sun and stars combined
lightning up the sky the nightlight rewinds


bella luna
you are
the mother and child
gold and silver king and queen
whispering the whisperers the messages oh
bella luna good night

i'll never live to see
your dying day
so let me please help you
in some way

I can't dance, I can't love
let me feed your soul
I'll dance on your dark side
with sun stone soles

I can play guitar
and see through your mighty disguise
crying inside
and you want it out

let me play you a song to sing my friend
we can dance on jupiter and run saturns' rings
lend me your peace and i'll give you my wings


bella luna
you are
my maker and my teacher
gold and silver king and queen
whispering the whispers the messages oh
bella luna sleep tight
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Old 06-12-2011, 07:11 PM   #23 (permalink)
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verse 1

every captain needs a sinking ship
every living flame dies when oxygen forfeits
every child was made by two peoples love
melting two parts into one whole

it's summer and warm you want the winter and cold
when the winter arrives you miss the summer most
you want day at night and the moon to shine as the morning sun
you want tomorrows feast but talk about yesterdays run

pre chorus

this is so clever
use of treasures
gold instead of shoes
cold instead of food


chorus

Opposite attracts
add and subtract
love times people
makes a whole lot of mess

gravity wont let me go
people wont let me stay
I hope there's a place in beetween
but for now I wont complain
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Old 06-16-2011, 01:55 AM   #24 (permalink)
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D-A-Adimish-BM-(FM)-G-A-D


yellow sky
and brilliant blue lights
flying above us
in a green air stripe

blood streaming red
as a cold persons cheeks
blue hands and feet
violet peace


oh this pretty masquerade
colours in different shades
love is pouring down as rain


your face is a painting
oh i've been waiting
to draw those lips so red

flowers blooming blue and white
your face is folding out the time

those green brown
eyes are such a fantastic sight
I just might stear a little second longer before

oh this pretty masquerade
colours in so many different shades
love is pouring down as rain
as rain as rain

not quite finished yet tho
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Old 06-21-2011, 07:28 AM   #25 (permalink)
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CAPO 6

This one is called "In Time" : )


verse 1

I can be your superman
I can be your only hand

the sun when it rains
one that makes you sane and say
that everything is going to be fine

oh with the wind
you outgrow the good
when the trees
whisper your name in time

pre chorus

save this song and buy
yourself some time
let the problems flow
out of sight

chorus

make me safe
lets try
to run away
in time
hope the clouds will stay
for a while
so the closet light hides me away
in time

verse 2

treasure treasure
you're holding me together
let's try to keep it pleasure
so we don't have to fall back

our roof is falling
breaking the installments
guess it wasn't timeless
our ship is off its' track

pre chorus

save this song and buy
yourself some time
let the problems flow
out of sight

chorus

make me safe
lets try
to run away
in time
hope the clouds will stay
for a while
so the closet light hides me away
in time


bridge(?)

with humble words we're crossing roads
you enter mine and I enter yours
surreal as it is the sun is setting across the sea


chorusx2
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Old 06-25-2011, 07:32 AM   #26 (permalink)
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This prohabition self decieving center we living in
can't ever tell our feelings practice taking cealings of seas within
I would love to see the trees dance with flames and tame the powers we need
if pigs can fly and water is hollow I'll join the war and seize the greed

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something I'm writing on now, reviews of this and all other lyrics are highly appriciated! I love feedback : )
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Old 07-19-2011, 05:44 PM   #27 (permalink)
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hey guys! I got a video up of me singing and playing my original song "Undefined", and I would love some feedback on both lyrics and music, thanks! : D


‪Undefined by ParadoxQeet - Original‬‏ - YouTube
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