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05-06-2011, 12:30 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2011
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Working on a song that I'm in love with. It's so fun to play! Check out the lyrics, would love some feedback
 oh you're a drug you get me high you get me by so I can stay by your side forget time and the rational reality that's filling up the space beetween you and I it's black and it's white and lets just lie about it all being in our mind ooh I know just take it slow although you wanna go fast just hold on to it and don't leave don't go lets move along the show it's you and me the phone is low just make it flow it's cool i know the frosty snow is already laid low lets pretend this is a game don't defend my friend depend on me we're gonna be fine in the end you can't amend me I can't ascend you it's a long road for two so prove me wrong so we can suspend the content remove the distance forget the wishlist leave the hat tricks lets stop this misspend |
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05-20-2011, 03:34 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2011
Posts: 46
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hey guys, I know it's not always fun to only read lyrics, so I'mma give you a demo version of one of my songs SSS (secret safe sand) : )) hope you'll enjoy it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bi5Qy_toXMg&feature=channel_video_title feedback is highly appriciated! : ) |
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05-20-2011, 06:18 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Cebu, Philippines
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05-20-2011, 10:58 AM
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05-24-2011, 02:17 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2011
Posts: 46
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UNDEFINED
feels like i'm wasting my time just wanna hold your hand in mine your love is stained something irrelevant inside lost the moments your eyes they dried behind I gave you water and sun to make you grow unlimited love and golden rings of powder snow something melted in the forest of my thoughts you disappeared and you weren't there anymore I'm feeling overwhelmed colorblinded by this line your time to shine it's dark I need a bell to chime it's rotting and I can't decide if it's undefined once I saw that sight I knew that it was wrong I wish it was unseen so I didn't have to write a song the clouds were cleared away and I was feeling good even though this isn't what it should but who am I to blame it was my decision by hand it's not my laws and definitely not my stand I'm still dreaming about it and thinking when I got time asking my self why this still is undefined I'm feeling overwhelmed colorblinded by this line your time to shine it's dark I need a bell to chime it's rotting and I can't decide if it's undefined |
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05-25-2011, 05:01 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2011
Posts: 46
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I wanna take you to a place
in outer space I'll promise to spade a bead that I can never lay I'll cut to the chase after several minutes thumbling with the trace somewhere out in space reasons living reasons dying asking what it was reaching you behind the atmosphere without a single pause tripping on your fragrence moving closer to the dragons jaws somewhere in outer space no-o playing my way with words praying for a better day you know I know you know respectable doze of thousand roses and they each know a thorn in outer space ^ This is still in the making, but I got a ****ing good feeling about this one. Feeling the melody and chord progression so good |
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05-28-2011, 02:39 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Mar 2011
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Finished the song, and this is imo one of the coolest one I've composed. It all went so smooth and I love the take on the song. Would love to hear what you guys think about it!
 )OUTER SPACE I wanna take you to a place in outer space I'll promise to spade a bead that I can never lay I'll cut to the chase after several minutes thumbling with the trace somewhere out in space reasons living reasons dying asking what it was reaching you behind the atmosphere without a single pause tripping on your fragrence moving closer to the dragons jaws somewhere in outer space no-o playing my way with words praying for a better day getting lost at all cost in the mazes of your bay respectable doze of thousand roses and they each know a thorn in outer space Burned my skin oh I sinned a thousand times before but not like this the temperature is scraping like a kittens paw my throat is sore it's numb I guess I should've left the second floor somewhere in outer space wishing for the floor to move the walls to fall to mix up grooves you've got me by your side as long as you don't dissapprove the fact that i'm the one who've made you prove that we can do anything in outer space I'll do anything you ask me to surpass the surface and put the sun in the moon if I have too venus and mars we're troubled art oh oh let me in and show me the carte to outer space |
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