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03-25-2011, 06:54 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Blade From Mister Fuzzy Head & V GRINDER
Video Included Below if I did it right lol
I thought a million ways ways that I could change I wish my life could bring a way to set it straight Never knowing love or anything between Living day by day a Future unforeseen I can handle the blade I can handle to screams I can't handle the way that the loneliness it brings I can handle the blade I can handle to screams I can't handle the way that the loneliness it brings I see my reflection I don't know who I am It's really hard to mention The life that I've lived Can I forgive myself My life is in dismay When my body goes to hell My memory remains I can handle the blade I can handle to screams I can't handle the way that the loneliness it brings I can handle the blade I can handle to screams I can't handle the way that the loneliness it brings Never knowing love or anything between Living day by day a Future unforeseen -I can handle the blade I can handle to screams I can't handle the way that the loneliness it brings-
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03-25-2011, 07:03 PM | #5 (permalink) |
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The facebook post was and sorry but this is for a review of lyrics AND I put it in the right category - I supplied the video just because I had one - I have another song I'd like a review on also - we are gearing up to write an album and I'd like to know what people think of our lyrics
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03-25-2011, 07:07 PM | #6 (permalink) | |
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Lyrics are ok, but we try to minimize people coming in to promote their music. As long as you're not here to specifically do that, you're ok. |
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03-25-2011, 07:10 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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please explain what I quoted below! Its where this thread IS lol UGH
"Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry (13 Viewing) Develop your lyrics and poetry here and get reviews."
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03-25-2011, 07:21 PM | #8 (permalink) | |
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Reviews of music, no. So um... why the music video? The reason I'm bringing this up, is because this section is easily exploited as a spam section due to the ambiguity of the way people interpret this section. It's easy to misunderstand, and we're working on it. For now, just do what you gotta do. I just wanted to give you a heads up. |
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03-25-2011, 07:52 PM | #9 (permalink) |
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I can just put lyrics no biggie - I didn't want a review of the music lol We are re-doing the song and I was wondering about what people thought about the lyrics - We have the creativity but are grammar sucks - - I placed the video just in case someone wanted to see/hear it in context - my fault lol I know now -
um I'll re post a different one so I get reviews - I don't think anyone will review this one now lol
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03-25-2011, 07:57 PM | #10 (permalink) | |
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