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02-15-2011, 12:21 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Untitled Grace, don't feel left out, into light Grace, and herd the trust, into life Screamin... I'm right here, I'm standin in the shadow of your fears Kill the seer I'm right here, wishing you could take back all your years Kill the seer Tide, don't feel the rush, implode inside Love, can you give her it all, your death so small Screamin... I'm right here, I'm standin in the shadow of your fears Kill the seer I'm right here, wishing you could take back all your years Kill the seer And the marble of your eye Extinguishes a flame inside Screamin... I'm right here, I'm standin in the shadow of your fears Kill the seer I'm right here, wishing you could take back all your years Kill the seer Last edited by Geetarguy; 02-16-2011 at 01:45 PM. |
02-15-2011, 12:29 PM | #2 (permalink) |
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Now I believe that I posted the video correctly, because I had someone tell me how to do it on these forums before, but I am not seeing it.
Youtube has been acting strange today though... If that is the case with all of you here is the actual link for the video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NPeNIi8c-bQ I will post the meaning of the lyrics soon |
02-15-2011, 12:35 PM | #3 (permalink) |
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If you want it to work, you make it like:
[ youtube ] NPeNIi8c-bQ [ / youtube ] Only omitting the spaces. If you did that, then IDK what's up.
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02-15-2011, 12:50 PM | #5 (permalink) |
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I wrote this song about a woman who I had been interested in, in the past couple weeks. It is about how she was a victim of domestic abuse, and I was "standing in the shadow of her fears" aka after her failed and violent relationship I was there trying to fix the peices.
The seer is obviously the man who beat her, and watched on as he did it, almost as outside of his body. It is about questioning whether or not I can pick up her pieces, and put her back together, and give her "it all". Knowing now that she is worth it, I am still trying. |
02-15-2011, 04:34 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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Thanks alot!
The Rise She said, "Live it high and all tonight, don't know if you got the world inside." "And let it salt upon your chin, rip you out destroy your only mind" It killed me back at 23 The man I lived had let me die So I give it all I've got to give Knowing this will be my only sigh Its the rise Its the rise Its got me down tonight Its the rise I'm gonna let it slide and let it feel my veins She said "Love it don't leave it anyway to breed it" "Know this chance has got to change it all" Go there too much there ain't got much to go there This beat fast my once my only squall So i 'cide to pick it one last time know this chance to find my only sign Its the rise Its the rise Its got me down tonight Its the rise I'm gonna let it slide let it feel my veins One more time. |
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My other thought is that if you hadn't explained what the song was about, I would have had no idea, although I felt the song was a supportive one due to these lines: Quote:
I liked the guitar solos and energy in your songs and the fact that you all look like you are having fun!
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02-16-2011, 08:47 AM | #9 (permalink) | |
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Hey thank you! Yeah when we get our PA system fixed, the quiter parts should be easily remedied. They style I have always written in is more poetic than lyrical, where it has a deeper meaning which may apply differently into your life than mine, or whoevers. But thanks for the feedback, we have changed untitled a bit, in the day since it has been up, and we are gettin real quiet, and also at the end fading away from the bridge. Anyways "The Rise", is about filial curses or blessings. Ergo whatever one's parents bestoy on them. It is about my struggle to rise above what my own parents gave to me. It is about the struggle to realize that even though they are drunks, they do in fact care, and always have. There is more to the song, but I'll leave that to yall. Take it easy! |
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