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01-09-2011, 02:04 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Jan 2011
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New guy!
Hi people,
I'm a little new to this, well, new to asking for opnions from more experienced folk.Started writing songs a while ago when I took up on the guitar, midlife n all that ha! Anyways, heres a couple of songs i wrote n would be glad of any comments, good or bad,cheers muckas! song 1 I Remember I remember, when you kissed me. Secret, emotions shining on through You pulled me, close and held me tight Tempting, me deep into the night I remember, when you touched me Our inner, souls they were entwined Now in your, hands you hold my heart Feel its, pain when we have to part I could walk to the moon for you And embrace the sun for you I'd swim the oceans in a day To be the one with whom you lay I remember, when you blessed me Your presence, brilliant as the morning sun You bathed me in your radiant light Now I've, found a meaning to this life I remember, when you kissed me Secret, emotions shining on through You pulled me, close and held me tight Tempting, me deep into your life I could walk to the moon for you And embrace the sun for you I'd swim the oceans in a day To be the one with whom you stay x 2 song 2 You know you want to I wanna buy you flowers everyday And watch over you where you lay Run my fingers through your hair Then undress you till your bare I feel you want to I know you want to You know you want to So show me you want to I wanna phone you every hour I need to soap you in the shower Kiss the dimples on your back And give your ass a playful smack I feel you want to I know you want you You know you want to So show me you want to I'd give you diamonds every day In the forlorn hope of a lay I wanna tease you with my tongue And then watch you come undone I think I'll have a heart attack If you ever treat me this way back Repeat verse 3 I feel you want to I know you want to You know you want to So show me you want to x2 So, there you go.comments invited please.The songs do have tunes to them on dhanley72 on youtube, the recordings aren't brilliant but gives a good idea how i 'hear' the words i write.Happy reading folks. Last edited by dhanley72; 01-16-2011 at 03:24 PM. Reason: delete all |