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01-03-2011, 03:04 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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Hillside Cartoonist Dies For Justice
hey guys, just decided to post some of my lyrics here in hopes of getting some feedback, but after four months it hasn't been goin so well haha. anyways, check em out and lemme know what you think! thanks guys.
untitled: paper bag your religion sack lunches for the children leading sheep into their pens nothings true in what they meant paper bag your religion sack lunches for the children easy to swallow, hard to follow easy to swallow, hard to follow easy to swallow, hard to follow how long you been around? cause the people need some new advice the old ways just isn't doing it cause the people are startin to see the light siege: Fillin' my mind with empty space Killin' my time cause there ain't none to waste My watch is the only thing ticking Where's my heart been? Siege, oh baby its a siege Pleading and crying, All the perks and the tie-ins, Oh a siege four years strong Siege, oh man its a siege Pleading and crying, Contradictions, we're defyin' Oh a siege four years strong Day to day its the same old bore No such thing as a laugh anymore My watch is the only thing thinkin', Babe, where's my mind been? Siege, four years strong, Siege, long time gone, Siege, four years strong, Four years strong Four years strong Four years... untitled 2: i just want to photograph i just want to bleed without consequence who says i'm not allowed to feel? crippled, by society ripples, in a quiet sea i'm rising out of the dark clawing through the dust and debris i just wanna act without my conscious too much to ask or too little to dream? ask yourself where you've been, the answer is closer than once thought burnt: oooh, getting burnt loving the feeling today man, cause it's an alright day everythings just floatin just peachy, everythings just burnin aww yeah, babies and wives are cleanin the messes, gun to my head but im just laughin oh, everything, everyone getting burnt how are you sir? take your pills, swallow your pride? at which point in this lovely, hurricane vacation, sudden revelations, supernova sh!t sun, are you gettin burnt? Last edited by Ghost; 05-01-2011 at 02:46 AM. |
02-12-2011, 03:02 AM | #3 (permalink) |
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here's a new one, cause even though no one's replying i'm hoping that by the amount of views i've gotten that someone is actually readin em. so, here it is.
smile: sitting here with my head in my hands unearthing all those memories non existent playbacks just a recall of fallacies the illusion of grandeur softens my beaten heart so when i go and live today i ain't breathin for her i ain't breathin for her contradictions set in, brought forth by my mind its year-round masquerade for the benefit of my smile, yeah standing here with a smile on my face generate those fallacies i dont bother walking cause i cant find a pace been too late for dawning the illusion of grandeur softens my beaten heart so when i go and cede today i ain't leavin for her i ain't leavin for her no, i won't be leavin for her |
03-05-2011, 01:34 AM | #4 (permalink) |
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good time
never learned a way but, he thought it couldn't hurt his love of music of love yeah! driven by demands and he's all caught up mazes of the mind and nothin's ever enough conflicted in ways of interest, it's just a question of action, but can he do it? giving an old circle a new line cause he just wants a good time obediently defiant in his ways the clouds in the sky only look different when they look the same to someone else and he's, he's driven by demands and he's all caught up mazes of the mind and nothin's ever enough conflicted in ways of interest, it's just a question of action, but can he do it? giving an old circle a new line cause he just wants a good time is it something he'll find? |
03-06-2011, 07:39 AM | #6 (permalink) | |
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No offense, but the reason you're probably not getting much feedback is because you're not really posting much else on the boards. As much as I'm assuming feedback is encouraged. This is music banter not feedback banter.
With that said, you have some interesting lyrical ideas. However, there's more reasons to be on this forum than just validation.
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04-18-2011, 12:42 AM | #8 (permalink) |
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test pattern
anonymity to make it easier but bleeding hearts and the rest try to teach what i learned and ended up with less but they can't and they will cause they tried and failed, the voice of reason, has been strangled i maimed too long too soon oh you know i wonder, what the masses will offer can you create destruction by destroying creation? what would my mother think? but they can't and they will cause they tried and failed, the voice of reason has been strangled the blame's too wrong, it's on you |
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