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Old 01-03-2011, 03:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hey guys, just decided to post some of my lyrics here in hopes of getting some feedback, but after four months it hasn't been goin so well haha. anyways, check em out and lemme know what you think! thanks guys.


untitled:


paper bag your religion
sack lunches for the children
leading sheep into their pens
nothings true in what they meant
paper bag your religion
sack lunches for the children

easy to swallow, hard to follow
easy to swallow, hard to follow
easy to swallow, hard to follow

how long you been around?
cause the people need some new advice
the old ways just isn't doing it
cause the people are startin to see the light



siege:

Fillin' my mind with empty space
Killin' my time cause there ain't none to waste
My watch is the only thing ticking
Where's my heart been?

Siege, oh baby its a siege
Pleading and crying,
All the perks and the tie-ins,
Oh a siege four years strong

Siege, oh man its a siege
Pleading and crying,
Contradictions, we're defyin'
Oh a siege four years strong

Day to day its the same old bore
No such thing as a laugh anymore
My watch is the only thing thinkin',
Babe, where's my mind been?

Siege, four years strong,
Siege, long time gone,
Siege, four years strong,
Four years strong
Four years strong
Four years...



untitled 2:

i just want to photograph
i just want to bleed without consequence
who says i'm not allowed to feel?
crippled, by society
ripples, in a quiet sea
i'm rising out of the dark
clawing through the dust and debris
i just wanna act without my conscious
too much to ask or too little to dream?

ask yourself where you've been,
the answer is closer than once thought



burnt:

oooh, getting burnt
loving the feeling today man,
cause it's an alright day
everythings just floatin
just peachy,
everythings just burnin
aww yeah, babies and wives
are cleanin the messes,
gun to my head but im just laughin
oh, everything, everyone
getting burnt
how are you sir?
take your pills,
swallow your pride?
at which point in this lovely,
hurricane vacation,
sudden revelations,
supernova sh!t sun,
are you gettin burnt?

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Old 01-24-2011, 10:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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no replies at all? just one'd be good, haha. thanks.
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here's a new one, cause even though no one's replying i'm hoping that by the amount of views i've gotten that someone is actually readin em. so, here it is.

smile:

sitting here with my head in my hands
unearthing all those memories
non existent playbacks
just a recall of fallacies

the illusion of grandeur
softens my beaten heart
so when i go and live today
i ain't breathin for her
i ain't breathin for her

contradictions set in,
brought forth by my mind
its year-round masquerade
for the benefit of my smile, yeah

standing here with a smile on my face
generate those fallacies
i dont bother walking cause i cant find a pace
been too late for dawning

the illusion of grandeur
softens my beaten heart
so when i go and cede today
i ain't leavin for her
i ain't leavin for her
no,
i won't be leavin for her
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Old 03-05-2011, 01:34 AM   #4 (permalink)
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good time

never learned a way but,
he thought it couldn't hurt
his love of music of love
yeah!

driven by demands and he's all caught up
mazes of the mind
and nothin's ever enough

conflicted in ways of interest,
it's just a question of action,
but can he do it?
giving an old circle a new line
cause he just wants a good time

obediently defiant in his ways
the clouds in the sky only look different
when they look the same to someone else

and he's, he's
driven by demands and he's all caught up
mazes of the mind
and nothin's ever enough

conflicted in ways of interest,
it's just a question of action,
but can he do it?
giving an old circle a new line
cause he just wants a good time

is it something he'll find?
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Thank you, means a lot!
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Thank you, means a lot!
No offense, but the reason you're probably not getting much feedback is because you're not really posting much else on the boards. As much as I'm assuming feedback is encouraged. This is music banter not feedback banter.

With that said, you have some interesting lyrical ideas. However, there's more reasons to be on this forum than just validation.
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No offense, but the reason you're probably not getting much feedback is because you're not really posting much else on the boards. As much as I'm assuming feedback is encouraged. This is music banter not feedback banter.

With that said, you have some interesting lyrical ideas. However, there's more reasons to be on this forum than just validation.
I get what you're saying, so none taken. Thanks again.

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test pattern

anonymity to make it easier
but bleeding hearts and the rest
try to teach what i learned
and ended up with less

but they can't
and they will
cause they tried and failed,
the voice of reason,
has been strangled
i maimed too long
too soon

oh you know i wonder,
what the masses will offer
can you create destruction
by destroying creation?
what would my mother think?

but they can't
and they will
cause they tried and failed,
the voice of reason
has been strangled
the blame's too wrong,
it's on you
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wow. that's some good lyrics. i loved reading them. keep up the good work!
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i dont like it, but keep working
Cool man, anything in particular you don't like? Any tips or whatever you could give me? Thanks.
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