Here's a song I wrote.... - Music Banter Music Banter

Go Back   Music Banter > Artists Corner > Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
Register Blogging Today's Posts
Welcome to Music Banter Forum! Make sure to register - it's free and very quick! You have to register before you can post and participate in our discussions with over 70,000 other registered members. After you create your free account, you will be able to customize many options, you will have the full access to over 1,100,000 posts.

 
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 12-22-2010, 11:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
Music Addict
 
[Royal Tenenbaum]'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Charlotte, NC
Posts: 72
Default Here's a song I wrote....

Last Dying Day

"I’m not really charming, I ain’t even cute,
That’s a fact of life that I won’t refute,
I can’t find it in me to be romantic,
I don’t really care to get into semantics,

I’m not rich, don’t even make enough to be poor,
But I’d rather fight for you than take a cheap, dirty whore,
I work through the day to be with you at night,
I fight through all the **** just to hold you tight,

I ain’t much a poet, not even too smart,
But when it comes to you, I’m here to do my part,
I say I’m yours, I’ll love you ‘til the end,
And yet here I am, all alone again,

No sophistication, wasn’t born with much class,
This country-club circle-jerk can kiss my ass,
Your family says I’m not good enough for you,
That may be, but I know one thing that’s true,

One thing I promise, will never go away,
One thing I hope that’ll make ya stay,
I’ll love you more and more, I can honestly say,
From the minute we met, to my last dying day,

I’ll hold ya in my arms ‘til the day you die,
And pray ya grow wings to fly up in the sky,
The choice is yours, it’s all been said,
But without your love, I might as well be dead,

My heart holds more than you can possibly weigh,
All these things I says might sound cliché,
My love burns brighter than a cigarette flame,
And it’ll stay that way to my last dying day."

Whattya guys think? It'd sound like some weepy ballad, but the lyrics are spoken over a downtempo kinda groove beat with a touch of soul. I got the inspiration and beat while listening to "Nugget," by Cake
__________________
MOMMY MAD AT ME 'CAUSE I MADE A BOOM ON THE RUG

[Royal Tenenbaum] is offline   Reply With Quote
 


Similar Threads



© 2003-2025 Advameg, Inc.