feedback please

MaximumFlow · 11-12-2010, 08:42 PM

this is just a random thing i did off the top of my head so i just want some feed back good or bad.

[...] i talk the talk and i walk the talk all u haters suck my f'ckin ****, late night convo on the telephone call up lady gaga everybody's laughin like haha, but this aint slim shady, baby but shady made me, now watch out for my fade away jump shot, im so hot you gon need them sun glasses i look at asses just for fun i blow away the fog just so i can watch you walk cuz me without you's kinda like dog with no bun, step up in my ride and i escape the high tide got my hair dyed and i dare you touch it man it's like dutch cuz my name is van ****.

(my last name's van ****)

11-12-2010, 08:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
MaximumFlow Groupie Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Da USA Posts: 15	feedback please this is just a random thing i did off the top of my head so i just want some feed back good or bad. [...] i talk the talk and i walk the talk all u haters suck my f'ckin **, late night convo on the telephone call up lady gaga everybody's laughin like haha, but this aint slim shady, baby but shady made me, now watch out for my fade away jump shot, im so hot you gon need them sun glasses i look at asses just for fun i blow away the fog just so i can watch you walk cuz me without you's kinda like dog with no bun, step up in my ride and i escape the high tide got my hair dyed and i dare you touch it man it's like dutch cuz my name is van . (my last name's van **)