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11-04-2010, 12:15 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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I'm with CoCo
Conan make song. Done so for many moon. Me like jazz. Me like hip hop. Me like folk. Me consider doing them at same time, but me decide me need condenser mic first.
song index: International House of Pork Carry this Burden Woodsman Set the Fires International House of Pork I think it's possible we've lived this life before Same ol' days roll by / same ol' wanting more Same ol' sinking of this ugly world of men Blend apart be different / follow every trend It'll only hurt for a while I've given up trying to fight it Life is wasted or I pretend until the end Either they are prophets or they are liars I'm just too conflicted to stand It'll only hurt for a while Carry this Burden the circles of a vulture round top my grave give chills to my widow and redemption to my name when I lived I was rabid and fearful of the sting hid inside my corner ignored the blessings it would bring You'll carry this burden while you're a young man Grow old and look back satisfied I'll watch the inside While they're looking down In the end, at least I tried I've cradled my comfort in the open arms of strangers because family won't matter be it sooner or be it later siblings who drown in afterbirth be they brothers or be they aunts haunt the shallow ghost of a family on the ropes You'll carry this burden while you're a young man Grow old and look back satisfied I'll watch the inside While they're looking down In the end, at least I tried Woodsman set the Fire: Woodsman Set the Fires someone at last / to share my bread someone whose shoes /aint full of lead I'll tell them tales of a man whose tall And the force that scarred / and scattered them all One by one / they've left and they've died Some say unholy things about those left alive But the woodsman / he burns the letters black he burns the whole forrest down just to cover his tracks The police chief protests by setting himself ablaze the woodsman just watches and he laughs himself into a daze Well the woodsman / he got old Well the woodsman feels regret / so he ups and burns himself to death and people like me they tell the stories still he lives on / although he's dead / through the blazes that he set the charred wood / they made into baskets and with his ash / they made his casket Last edited by someonecompletelyrandom; 12-25-2010 at 01:00 AM. |
11-04-2010, 12:21 AM | #2 (permalink) |
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I can't listen right now, but I definitely like this. I feel like it's a lot more poetic than I'm used to. I know I just said the same thing to Erica but I mean this in a different way. I mean it's something where you can take the lines out of context and still know it's from a poem or something meant to flow.
"and with his ash / they made his casket" is a really, REALLY strong line, and it's perfect for the ending. This is great. |
11-04-2010, 07:24 AM | #3 (permalink) |
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It's a good song, but the mix of it could be improved in my view. The guitar sounds too loud in relation to your voice, which is barely audible. Don't be shy to let the listener discover your voice. Even if you don't like it yourself. You might be pleasantly surprised, so give it a chance.
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11-04-2010, 03:08 PM | #4 (permalink) |
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I think there's a lot going on in the song at some parts, like with all of the laughing and such. It could be a lot different and a lot easier to focus the laughing or maybe have one person laughing. I don't know. I just think it's distracting and when it stops, I'm still confused as to why it happened. I like the vocals a lot, I think they fit perfectly with the lyrics and with the feel of the song and with the chords.
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11-20-2010, 09:09 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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At Home Blues
Little blues tune I wrote this evening. Given my love for sampling, I decided to use the percussion from a Lightnin' Hopkins song. I also wanted to sample TV Commercials, because the song is essentially about my current situation, where in I see friends 1 or 2 times a week (if at all), post on MB, eat potted meat and ramen noodles (sometimes I mix things up and combine the two) and watch a lot of boring television, which really means I'm watching commercials. EDIT: Upon listening back to it, it really blows. I can't even make it all the way through. Apologies for even posting it... Last edited by someonecompletelyrandom; 12-09-2010 at 01:46 PM. |