My song about Mayo

gunnels · 10-24-2010, 01:50 PM

I sense a lot of resentment in these lyrics. Letting out your feelings is the first step to writing good lyrics, true, but now you must attempt to take what you have written and condense it into something a little more constructive. You know that mayo is disgusting, but now you must ask yourself "why is it disgusting?" You will never truly know yourself or your lyrics until you are able to answer that question.
Also, throw in some interpretative dancing. For indie cred.

~~James~~ · 10-24-2010, 02:17 PM

Bravo.

teknoaxe · 11-28-2010, 05:55 PM

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Originally Posted by James

Bravo.

I agree with the Primus thing. You should get a bass guitar and get some trippy lines going on the lyrics.

gunnels · 10-24-2010, 02:21 PM

Ah, I'm flattered.

Sljslj · 10-26-2010, 10:54 PM

What's wrong with mayo? I think it's pretty good, alot better than that crappy Miracle Whip.

Insane Guest · 10-26-2010, 11:26 PM

I see a deeper message in this song, I just don't know what it is.

bugsy2301 · 10-31-2010, 08:54 PM

GaGa rip-off.

Queen Boo · 11-02-2010, 05:41 PM

I'm afraid to ask what regular mayo is made of.
Probably ground up cow fetuses and tangiable lack of hope.

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 11-02-2010, 05:58 PM

Mayo is tastey on everything! Except for pork rinds. Lesson learned.

BananaPhish · 11-14-2010, 07:37 PM

Haha, well at first I thought it was a funny bunch of lyrics you got there. Then I paused for a moment and took a listen to what was coming out of my headphones. If Pink Floyd can sing about gnomes and unicorns I suppose someone might as well sing about mayo

. Other than that I thought is was really well constructed and full of humor, which I think can make a song quite excellent. Wouldn't be one of my favorite songs I suppose, but entertaining non the less, a bit like Frank Zappa.

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Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	What's wrong with mayo? I think it's pretty good, alot better than that crappy Miracle Whip. __________________ MY LYRICS

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bugsy2301 Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Torquay, UK Posts: 54	GaGa rip-off. __________________ She's not sure if you're a boy or a girl... Le Last.FM

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10-24-2010, 02:17 PM	#2 (permalink)
~~James~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Scotland Posts: 4,483	Bravo.

10-26-2010, 11:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
Insane Guest Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: CA Posts: 1,322	I see a deeper message in this song, I just don't know what it is.

11-02-2010, 05:58 PM	#9 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	Mayo is tastey on everything! Except for pork rinds. Lesson learned.

11-14-2010, 07:37 PM	#10 (permalink)
BananaPhish Groupie Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 46	Haha, well at first I thought it was a funny bunch of lyrics you got there. Then I paused for a moment and took a listen to what was coming out of my headphones. If Pink Floyd can sing about gnomes and unicorns I suppose someone might as well sing about mayo . Other than that I thought is was really well constructed and full of humor, which I think can make a song quite excellent. Wouldn't be one of my favorite songs I suppose, but entertaining non the less, a bit like Frank Zappa.